Reviews for Overlady |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is going to be good. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great, it's even better than that one where she managed to actually summon the Overlord. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tend not to review because "I enjoyed it!" seems kind of vapid and pointless, but I really have to say: this is hilarious, and I'm loving it. Also looking forward to seeing what Louise's Evil heritage means for the Valliere family's history, and the presence of Overlord elements for the setting in general. But then, you're EarthScorpion; interesting things done to the setting are pretty much given. I was also happy to see Louise get active at the end there in pursuit of the tome; passivity is a danger when dropping a character into a situation they know nothing about, so I'm happy to see her still motivated and active. Also looking forward to the trouble this will cause when it comes time to do serious Evil, and whether and how she'll adapt her goals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. This is definitely a rather unique story. I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah, another chapter already? How delightful, this is a great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The blackest art of bureaucracy indeed! A fun, lighthearted romp. 5/5. |
![]() ![]() ![]() funfun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. ...and "the Blackest Art of Bureaucracy". So hilarious. So true. Hmmm, black staff. Wonder what weapon this is. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This should prove to be an incredibly interesting and entertaining story. Further down the line, it could be interesting if somehow this Louise would found herself, due to some misunderstandings, facing against Pusakuronu's Dungeon Keeper Ami. Thank you for writing and sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Louise really need to learn that dastardly and blackest of he black arts? Can't she just get Gnarl to sully his hands with the bureaucracy? Whatever the case, love this story, and I can't wait for her magic tutoring to begin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... That was refreshing... good to see you've updated, and that it has turned out so great... can't wait to see more. Signed, Mr. Nobody |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually evil is like beating up fluffy things, smash down flowers and turning cheerfully useless hippies into productive members of society. Go go! She who Looks Disgustingly Adorable in a Chemise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "and the Blackest Art of Bureaucracy." *shudder* Gnarl wasn't kidding when he said he was going to teach evil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol good start...and nice to encounter a rare overlord gem here...1 overchick 2 not instantly uber powerful and evil |