Reviews for Overlady |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ooooohhhh this is gonna be good continue soon XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snort* Seriously I should have expected this crossover; I mean, of COURSE someone would write it! I am very happy, however, that it's you. Even if that means the Exalted and the F.E.A.R. are going to be updated more slowly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting idea, very well written and minions which are a plus to anything fun. Let's go hunt treasure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent... finally, someone decided to try this... I've been waiting for this... although, perhaps the Vampire could have sparkled ;P (Just Kidding!) Also, a while back, I thought up a concept that was similiar to this, but different... Basically, what if when Louis does the summoning, instead of summoning the Overlord (LIke so many others), she summons his armor to her world... now, at first, the armor seems useless and what not, but later, she finds out that it not only has some minions inside of it, but also the spirit of the Former Overlord... all she would need to do is put it on... and the armor will not only change to meet her body's physicallity and gender, but also reshape her body and mind while she is wearing the armor to something more appropriate for a Mistress of Evil... In other words, when Louis puts on the armor (first time being forced on by the minions) she ends up with a body that is older, more feminine but built, and has the secondary mind of the Overlord in her head... however, I was thinking, when she tries to remove it, she turns back physically to her real form... This way, no one was able to recognize her. I had even thought out a description of her new form if you are interested... What do you think? Anyway... awesome work. Hope you continue, and good luck with this and your other stories. Signed, Mr. Nobody |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay. something with potential, hope to see it work out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want the next chapter soooo bad... it is a great start to something grand i must say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am greatly amused and looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well nothing says easy low level xp then Skeletons and Zombies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This will be good update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could potentially be good... I hope it doesn't take away from Green Sun, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... Lawful Evil Louise or just Overlord Louise with stupid "Evil" humor? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only Overlord/Znt Crossover worth a reading is now on . Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe, okay, this I suppose could be interesting. :) |
![]() ![]() "I swear on the goodness of my heart and by all that is Holy and Good to not hurt even the slightest hair on your head" *snerk* |
![]() ![]() Nice. Seems almost like the book Good Omens, and that was a GREAT book. It made no sense whatsoever, but that's what made it great, and I be sensing that in this here fanfiction. |