Reviews for Champion
Guest chapter 5 . 1/31
Geez, what's with the stupid moon owl thing? This is the second story where it's shown up and it dumb as hell. Hedwig was extraordinary as it was. You don't need to make her your original species do not steal on top of it.
littleditto chapter 15 . 12/31/2024
This is great
bpvreader chapter 3 . 12/19/2024
I’m sorry, although I am enjoying your story I have to call
B. S. On your characterization of Dumbledore in his interview with Harry. Dumbledore’s character would’ve seen him fall flat in his face as far as Harry’s perspective exists.
Daynieg chapter 14 . 12/14/2024
Very enjoyable read.
WhiteElfElder chapter 15 . 11/11/2024
The Potter luck is running hot...hopefully it does not turn frigid any time soon.
WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 11/11/2024
Couldn't Sirius and Harry use the Potter Manor? Sirius should be able to authorize it and Harry can recharge the wards being a Potter.
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 11/10/2024
Credit cards are just a start of what Harry can introduce; it is just the most obvious to start with.
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 11/10/2024
How did Albus know that the hits on the wards were DEs trying to get Harry and not something like Potter elves trying to retrieve the heir?
odonnellzoo99 chapter 15 . 9/8/2024
This is an excellent story. I just wish the series had happened instead of ending at Christmas of second year.
I've read many of your stories and I believe that this is my favorite.
Warrior0974 chapter 14 . 6/23/2024
Loved this version of Harry potter the twist with Hedwig was fabulous and how he released Sirius from Azkaban was brilliant. I would love to see this story continued here's hoping!
Warrior0974 chapter 7 . 6/23/2024
I'm loving this story, love this version of Hedwig . When he started talking about different games my first thought was wouldn't it be funny if he had the dungeons and dragons game with him, I can see him being an excellent dungeon master?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2024
I wonder if Harry had ever read Roald Dahl's "Matilda" and drew parallels between her and himself?
Vampireking40 chapter 11 . 5/10/2024
You don't see that kind of attitude out of Dumbledore that often in these kind of stories. I like that we have a very good Dumbledore. Even Snape seems to be different especially with Harry as a Ravenclaw and not a Gryffindor. He would be even better to Harry had he been a Snake.
garvit.bansal234 chapter 15 . 4/15/2024
quite good
KarisTasogare chapter 8 . 2/25/2024
as I read this chapter, a question occurred to me.
as this 'welcoming-briefing' didn't happen with the Grif's (not in the movie anyway)
Was this just something else harry 'missed' (as McG was too busy with other things) or is(will it turn out to be) a Raven thing? (for the fic, will Harry need to clue in Hermione about the 'extra' classes, or might she miss them by not signing up in time)?
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