|Reviews for How He Got There|
| Walker of Nothing chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Hey good chapter. I like Death Note so I was happy to see this one
| H31R OF T1M3 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Hmm, that was interesting. Thx for the story!
| Duwee Davis II chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Meh, there's only a few errors- 'Ryuk said, not pausing is walk this time.'- his, not is.
'The trip itself took about a ten units of Shinigami time, about an hour in the human world.'- about ten, not 'about a ten'.
Boring grammatical fixes out of the way... I like this. You even teased at the pilot with the line referring to how even a child could pick up a Death Note. Also, discussing the vagueness of time to an eternal being is... something I like to do myself. I don't know if you're into Touhou, but I recently did a drawing (my deviantart is exactly the same name as this account, replacing spaces with dashes) called 'Hourai Victim' simply as a tribute to one of my favourite immortals, Fujiwara no Mokou.
Immortality in the Shinigami is interesting, because, as you noted... they're reliant on humans. Once the heat death of the un comes, even Shinigami will waste away and die. That's a strange, but fitting thought.