|Reviews for strangers on board|
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/25/2016
Nice run. If you do keep dabbling with Fanfiction I look forward to reading it.
| brankel1 chapter 4 . 12/30/2015
| bjq chapter 4 . 12/4/2015
| De rien bitches chapter 4 . 12/2/2015
I think you should completely start over
| reaverattack chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
I don't know if you intend to finish this, but I very much hope you do.
| Bluesky20 chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
| Irishbrneyes chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Keep this story going it has potential. Can't wait for the next chapter. By the by, could you make the chapters a little bit longer? Please?
| Alliance Webb chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
It's a very nice start. It's sometimes confusing though, how you switch from one person's mind to another without much indication of the change. It's something I'm fighting with myself in my new 3rd person omnipotent spree. I know I've been asking for feedback if it gets confusing, so I hope this helps. Maybe more indication at the beginning of the paragraph of who's thinking what would be helpful? Great work, though, keep at it!
| LadySnape88 chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
Very good. More please :)
| LadySnape88 chapter 2 . 12/6/2012