|Reviews for Half-Ghost Kitsune|
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/16
sasuke is a TOTAL tool, he's a douche bag, that's EASILY SEEN... Come on when you have genetic EYEBALLS that make you kill your best friend? Your not going to be a NICE person... His whole clan is FULL of nothing but betrayers and low-lifes, I have no idea why the second just didn't EXTERMINATE them like the insects they are... Seriously. If the problem is genetic.. then even IF sasuke lives.. then what are his kids gonna do? Or his kids's kids OR their kids' kids?(this isn't an IF they will go bad, it's a genetic PROBLEM).. It seems to be an issue overlooked... (treating one generation after another, is putting a "band-aid" on an arterial spray!) You gotta "fix" the problem...aka.. the bloodline with the sharringan, has to CEASE TO EXIST!
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/15
Actually, Danny, danni, Dan AND vlad could ALL make constructs of ectoplasm.(jack too in an alternative timeline). Also they ALL had the "ghost stinger" which was an electric attack that also sapped ectoplasm/strength. Makes sense really, ectoplasm is more or less an "inert" energy made of the ghost's will, so it could in THEORY become ANY type of energy. It is also pretty much how ghosts can change their shape, they IN GENERAL don't HAVE a shape, except for residual personal image, (they look like they do because they THINK they should look like they do) Also notice that even though he can FLY and turn intangible, naruto still FAILS to see the HUGE shrine with a GIANT UZUMAKI symbol in front of it that is on the outskirts OF THE TOWN! Apparently enhanced EYESIGHT is not an ability. (even if he doesn't know he's from a clan, a giant version of the same symbol that's ON ALL HIS CLOTHES ought to make him CURIOUS)
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/15
BARF, how about "the uchiha are ALWAYS what are wrong in the world, GO DIE IN A DITCH!".. That might make me trust him... after all "the only 'good' uchiha is a DEAD ONE".
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/15
I always thought it would be FUNNY to make sasuke kill HIMSELF, I mean overshadow itachi and jump off a cliff, or have one of the others do it, never telling sasuke anything OR have danzo's technique actually get rid of them BOTH... OR just making naruto NOT GIVE a crap about him and him rushing into death, one of the MANY times he did without a bodyguard... Yeah, just have him die(earlier, is better, maybe make sure that condom DIDN'T break).. I think it would change naruto's future for the better BIG TIME without the whole "destroyer" thing.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/14
Yeah kakashi isn't much of a teacher, to be honest, I never figured out WHY they made him one, I mean it DOESN'T make much sense, because he would be honestly a better "out-in-the-field" fighter, or lead by demonstration. I also don't know why the teams are grouped the way they are... I mean regardless of what the hokage and whomever want, friendships CANNOT form between some people, they just CAN'T... So if that is what they are shooting for, they are doomed to failure from the jump. It MIGHT have worked back in their days, but that was during a constant war when they all KNEW they were at war. If they are just wanting solid "working relationships", well you can't really have THAT either when two people truly DO rub up against each other's personality wrong... In the field? Maybe, training? You might as well throw that idea out the window. Also expecting teamwork right off the bat is ALSO pretty STUPID... Especially when they are fresh out of an academy where it was "every person for themselves" and EVERYTHING was a competition. That kind of environment MIGHT make "good ones" stand out, but at also breeds sociopaths. (look at the leaf's track record for creating missing nin). (or clockwork's vision that naruto is the destroyer... Ever think it's BECAUSE of these dullards?)
That said, you pointing out to naruto about NOT working with the fox is a good call... They should be a well-oiled machine, since they've spent so much time working/living together. He NEEDS to work on that. The bit about the bloodline?.. Nah, can't agree with that one.. Look at it this way, the uchiha are DEPENDENT on their eyes.. I mean absolutely HOOKED! Have you ever seen a SINGLE fight, that itachi, obito, or sasuke have EVER done where they didn't use their eyes EXTENSIVELY? Kakashi himself NEVER fights with his sharringan covered. Even to the point of chakra exhaustion. And the hyuuga? JUST AS BAD...Their ENTIRE WAY (ONLY way) of fighting revolve SOLELY around their eyes!(They learn NO ninjutsu, genjutsu, no kicks or ANYTHING else) So bad mouthing naruto for always using his? Is complete HYPOCRISY!
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/14
And again, instead of worrying about giving him POWERS maybe clockwork should have MONKEYED WITH WHOM HE'S AROUND, as in, NO TEAM SUICIDE! (sas, sak, nar). it's a dumb combo that works more in the series because of plot armor, plot holes and RELYING on luck. It does NOT make a good team. Sakura should be NOWHERE NEAR sasuke. Nor should anybody really, the kid is TOXIC... ROOT would be a good place for him though. (after all, kabuto, itachi, orochi were ALL in root, so it would just be continuing the tradition). I mean I can't really BLAME naruto, if I was partnered up with those two TWITS and that WORTHLESS teacher, I'd go HOMICIDAL too! (STARTING with THEM!)
You don't WANT him going down a dark path? Easy fix, actually REALLY easy fix... Simply ONLY put him around people he'd LIKE. NOT THAT TOUGH, when he gets along with more then 90% of the ninja! Just keep him away from "certain" people until they either get killed off(sasuke), or they "come around"(kakashi).
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/14
Ever think, it's because of all the crap naruto went through ALREADY?.. I mean seriously the village NEEDS a wake up call (even the others and the big-bag ghosts wanted to blow it up just LOOKING at naruto's life) I'd say THAT'S the people they needed to rewind time and "fix".
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/9/2017
Update when you can... Soon
| NHarem Foreva chapter 8 . 12/28/2016
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2016
I hope u continue this
| godzillafan1 chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
desiree's in the harem? sweet! I was hoping for her to be one of your two ghost choices I don't really watch danny phantom but the character desiree has always interested me.
| Master Xehanort chapter 8 . 4/16/2016
I love it so keep going my friend and don't let this get you down.
| Drifter950 chapter 8 . 4/5/2016
Like the others of yours that I have read, I really enjoyed the stories.
I hope your MUSE for Half-Ghost Kitsune and your other stories is strong for you.
May the MUSE always be with you!
| Ciarle chapter 8 . 6/12/2015
sorry about that, looking forward to reading more on this story
| Lasse2731 chapter 8 . 3/31/2015
update soon I can't wait to read more!