|Reviews for How Could You Forget?|
| Sakura Klein chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
great stories from the 1st chapter...it really nice but chapter 2...Yuji have amnesia...will he regained his memory or who will help him? is it Kazumi or Shana? but nice story...but i want yuji and shana together too...keep continue the story!
| BloodseekerX chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Yuji, as a torch, doesn't have any blood. Season 1 remember?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Yaay for the next chapter. Inspiration can be troublesome, I have moments where things just rush into my head and I'll update each week, but I also have moments, like now where it will take sometimes before I have enough inspiration to finish a chapter. Sometimes reading other fics gives me inspiration. Anyway as for your question Kazumi is her first name and Yoshida is her last name. Yuji calls her Yoshida-san and Shana calls her Kazumi. Well on with the rest; Your welcome, i don't like posting reviews that only say things like, awesome story, or how cute. I prefer saying things like what I like and what I'm wondering could happen. This way the writer can get ideas for future chapters and they'll know what the good points are of what to write. Every time I ask my sis what she things every time I update a new chapter her answers are like, awesome, lol how funny and I can't wait what will happen next. I can't do much with that. The only thing I know is that she liked it and when I ask her to be more detailed she says she doesn't know what to say, because she likes every part of the chapter.
Your spelling isn't that bad compared to a lot of other writers' stories that sometimes are impossible to read or understand, because of the bad grammar.
The length of a chapter isn't important to me either, as long as the chapter itself is good it doesn't need to be long. This chapter was nice, seeing how they try to break the ice now that Yuji's head is as empty as Cloud's was after Zack got him out of the Shinra mansion, if not better, since he's not like a plant and had didn't receive any big mind screw/ rape thanks to some aliens cells messing with his head and the recent death of his best friend.
Shana becoming shy isn't all that out of character, sometimes when Yuji makes her feel embarrassed she acts like that. If your crush lost his memories I wouldn't get shy and tsun at the same time (if I was a tsundere and had a crush that just lost his memories), just shy after noticing that he's still there with his goofy protagonist smile. (That was meant funny) And I don't m,ind that this chapter isn't packed full of action, of action would come this early in a story that would be a very sad attempt of making that story likable to other people. Trouble has to be build up slowly, unless it's been there since the beginning of the story. So the next chapter will be Yuji trying to pick up his life, and since they'er still on winter break he doesn't need to worry about school yet. Or the picnick... or new year... which is like 5 days away. I'm not sure how Japanese celebrate yew year, but I think they go visit some shrine with family and friends or one of the two, or their dates.
I guess Shana can worry about their enemies later, but when will she tell Margery and Wilhelmina about it?
Take your time with your next chapter better slow updating and having an awesome chapter than a bad and rushed one.
| Mastodonic chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
One: Kazumi is her first name, Yoshida is her last. Yuji calls her Yoshida-san, but I'm not sure about everyone else.
Two: I personally didn't notice anything wrong with Shana's personality, as she does have a shy side sometimes. I think you're doing a good job, keep it up!
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Great start for this story I really love it. It looks interesting and I want to know what will happen. Will Shana and Kazumi try to gain his affection again or will they help him to regain his memory first? Both can also happen.
Ow and I noticed that Kazumi called Yuji first Sakai and later Sakai-kun. Well the last one is the one Kazumi uses, but anyway the rest is fine. I see only a few spelling error, but let's overlook that. Keep up the writing please.
| LeMaK chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Nice story so far. I hope you make it ShanaxYuji. I hope you will write more ;D
| DeadInReality chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
So sad... continue please?