|Reviews for What Happens Now|
| IHeartBonesBooth chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
| bexie25 chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
Loved it :)
| GracieDoll chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
WOW. Magic Fingers was HOT, but this, my dear, was SIZZLING! I love how Brennan is so take charge in this, choosing her room, telling Booth to strip down, and commanding him to take off her top. I feel that it is so true to character. That's exactly how she would be. Even the anxious, nervous Booth in the beginning is just how I believe he would be with her. Whew! And then how Booth just worships her body, and is overwhelmed by the beauty of her...it was beautiful. And the rough sex? SO FRIGGIN HOT. I love how Booth talks during the act, too. Makes it even sexier. You don't disappoint, I am in love with your writing!
| love2read2much chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
I wish the episode ended this way, I enjoyed this read vey much - thank you
| MJRojas28 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Dang gurl! That was smokin'! Is there a sequel? Or a mirror piece with Brennan's side? Please say yes! You can't leave them with just one fantastic shag and let it be it! It's not fair!
I simply love the way you write Booth, really. I have it as my own personal xxxmas project to reread K2B this Christmas,so get ready for dem reviews!
Excellent as always
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
| del1 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I really loved this! I loved how you incorporated some very serious moments, along with some light and funny moments. Here are the things I loved the most…
This imagery of Booth I found exceptionally sexy. “Carefully tucking the uncorked bottle of Pinot Noir under my arm and holding two fresh wine glasses in one hand and my crumpled, rented tuxedo jacket in the other, I fumbled for the elevator button.” – For some reason, envisioning him holding those dainty little glasses in his huge, veiny manly hands just does it for me.
I loved the tension building up between these two. “Bones reached over my arm, brushing the top of my hand with her wrist as she reached for the button.” – I’m going to say she did that on purpose ;-)
Now when Booth responded with this: "Whatever you want, Bones," I replied. "Whatever you want." – I pretty much lost it. I don’t know if anyone else thought this was hot, but I can hear him saying this, in his oh so sexy voice and it just kind of turns me on that he really doesn’t care where the hell they are, just as long as he’s with her. I also kind of got the feeling that he was kind of flirting with her, maybe? I don’t know… I just loved that response.
“I reached up and scratched the back of my head.” I love this. Love, love, love! Booth touching himself (not sexually, we’ll get to that later) is just awesome. I have a thing for his hair, so I probably find this more exciting than the average person.
"Because, of course, your little room wouldn't have provided us very much space to hang out." – Oh Brennan, you flirty little devil. She knew exactly what she wanted. I don’t blame ya Bren. Lucky bitch! But seriously, I love the banter between them inside her room. It’s kind of like, are they flirting? Or, is she serious? This is hot… JUST DO IT ALREADY!
I wanted to mention that I appreciated that you added this: (since I'd taken them off at some point that afternoon before dancing a second round with Cam) – I LOVE Booth & Cam’s relationship. I appreciate their friendship and it saddens me that it’s not displayed more on the show. Sad face. But, YAY, you added it! And I squeed a little bit.
"Booth—don't be a prude." – HEHEHEHEHEHE!
Flyers Boxers! 300 points for Gryffindor! (I know you won’t get the reference, but it amuses me, and this is all about me, sooo…)
FYI: I love Fuzzy socks.
Ok (serious face) Now we get to some sticky grown-up stuff.
"Really?" she said, her voice suddenly taking on vulnerability…” Ah yes, Brennan and vulnerability, one of my favorites things. I feel like at this point, a wall crumbled. At this point, Booth penetrated (hehe) her invisible shield with his sincerity and praising of her gift that she wasn’t even sure he wasn’t going to like. Booth is so sweet. Awww.
“All that fucking line did was keep us on edge…” FIRST F BOMB, WOO-HOOO! I’m ready for sex now. I mean, between them. Sex between them... They’re ready for sex… Ok – never mind. Moving on.
Now we get to my favorite part of this story. God, I love this. The gravity of this scene is… *dreamy sigh* I could feel the love being communicated between them. So good. “Her lips brushed against mine but she hesitated, pulling her head away as I felt her fingertips gently feather over the bruise on my cheek left by her father's hard right hook when I'd arrested him the day before."I'm sorry," I whispered vaguely. She shook her head, stroking her fingers over my puffy, bruised cheekbone as she raised her lips to meet mine.” – OH MY GOD, MONKEY! *fistbump* this was fan-freaking-tastic. Booth saying he’s sorry, geez, heart breaking almost. And I love how Brennan doesn’t respond verbally… Just, so well written.
So then there’s this: “I opened my eyes to see her gaze drop and seeing her looking at my dick like that made my balls tighten even more than they already were.” – You are probably going to think I’m like the biggest perv ever, LOL. But oh well, I’m not afraid of being judged! I really enjoyed Booth referring to his penis as his dick (Oh my gosh I’m blushing so hard right now!) Which I know is normal for most men. Most guys don’t go around calling their penis a penis, but when it’s Booth saying it (even in his head) it’s just really sexy. He’s so confident and cocky and just… whew! That was good.
I died laughing reading this part “…as I slid those babies off.” (his socks) I have no idea why that’s so funny to me. It’s just hilarious.
“I wasn't going to make love to Bones in socks.” HAHAHA, now there’s an image! Not sexy!
Now we get to some ovary exploding material here…"Shhhh," I whispered to her as I stepped towards her again…” Booth shushing her, twice! Oh gosh, that’s so sexy, and sensual and I love it.
I think my favorite part of this love scene is this: “My breath hitched in my throat as I pulled it up over her belly, seeing for the first time the soft curve of her belly and her navel…” I love the feeling of this. I love that Booth is so taken back by the sight of her belly alone. To me, there is almost nothing sexier than the curves and lines of a woman’s stomach, and I love that Booth appreciated that part of her.
"Where you goin'?" I grunted at her as I crawled onto the bed and stalked after her on my hands and knees.” - Oh Lord… Ok, so if that was me he was saying that to, he would have been catching me in his arms. So hot! You write the sexiest sex scenes, woman. You make Booth so hot.
I think it’s safe to say that all Bones fan fiction smut writers have something in common when it comes to Booth and sex. He likes ripping off Brennan’s underwear. It’s just about the sexiest thing he could do.
You already think I’m a perv so I’m not going to get into the details of how much I loved Booth tugging on himself… and all that… juicy goodness. :-)
"You like that?" I asked her, my voice nearly a rasp as I jerked my hip into hers…” Monkey, if you insist on continuing to write Booth like this, you are going to ruin my life, ok? I cannot handle it. I cannot handle him asking her if she likes it! *sobs*
"Do you like it a little more rough, Bones?" I grunted…” - Just know, that I’m giving you evil eyes right now! (Seriously though, don’t ever stop writing smut. Please.)
I really enjoyed reading this line. I liked the “yellowish light” part a lot. One of my favorite lines in the story. “…her beautiful body accepting me, my cock shining in the yellowish light of the room as her liquid silk covered every inch of it…” – great job! :-)
And finally, this: “Bones stroked my chest with her finger, drawing a line up from just above my navel, between my pecs to the little notch at the base of my neck.” – Love the touchy feely after sex, and I love it when it’s Bones that’s doing it. We already know Booth would be the touchy feely, spooner type, but I’m extra amused when it’s Brennan.
| DBGrannyFan chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Loved it...You are definitely the best Booth writer! You have his speech and his cocky, sexiness down to a tee.
| catleft chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
In general I dislike first-person narrative, but this was really good and sexy.
| JBCFlyers19 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Great, just great!
| yoshimi0701 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
O. ! SO HOT. It's very cold outside tonight, but absolutely I NEED a cold shower. LOVE IT. Thanks, great writers!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
| mef1013 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I love all the little details you always bring to the story. Like the fact thay her room number is 206. I knew the "smut" would be outstanding. You never fail to disappoint.
| Lesera128 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
As someone who has been waiting for this since Interleague play last spring when the Bravos kicked the schnike out of the Rays, I have to say I believe it to have been well worth the wait. You, my friend, write Booth first person POV like no other. The hot sexiness with everything else is hot...almost goes without saying. I also couldn't help but wondering if Booth was breaking the fourth wall with the whole "my partner underestimates me all the time" bit there, hmmm? Partners...co-writers...huh. Probably just a coincidence. So, here is to what I think is one of the longest reviews I've ever written for you. Consider it a downpayment on your Saturnalia gift...which hopefully I will get written, proofed, and posted before Twelfth Night. If I can do that, I'll be pretty happy. But, on that note, don't get used to these long rambling things...next time, back to single irksome emoticon reviews I say. ::Grin:: Well done.
| mickeydavis123 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
ASDFGHJKL *calms down* your writing is amazing i freakin love you like i love bones c: