|Reviews for Ryder Curtis|
| mama's angle chapter 2 . 7/30
Can you please update soon
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
hey hey hey. WeirdoOutsideYourBedroom was just trying to give you some constructive criticism. You don't have to be a little stuck up bitch about it. She's trying to help you. If you don't want help and criticism from people, then let me suggest YOU DON'T PUT THINGS UP THAT ARE GRAMATICALLY AND FORTMATTED INCORRECTLY. So YOU should get over it, and grow the hell up, babe.
| TheCreatureHubLover chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
just get over it
| TheWeirdoOutsideYourBedroom chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Yeah, I'm gonna stop right here. I got through the first paragraph and I have this to say:
-Where are the speech marks, y'know the "around when people are talking"
-Why would Soc's beat up a girl, yeah they are douchebags with to much money, but they wouldn't beat up and knife a girl, greaser or not.
-You're character is a freaking major mary-sue.
Yeah, try again hun. Something less fake and over dramatic and more believable.
| staygold101 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
| mystique Calypso chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Update soooooon! I can't wait!
| Quintessential Writer chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Uh, where's the quotation marks? And the spacing of the dialogue? :L