Reviews for Some Disturbance in Weather
FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
wow! this so cute!
syieda.ellis chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Lol. Love it :)
thenormalpotato chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
How did Jack know about Yuki-onna? Is she a friend?
Crazed NetGirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
nice this is really good i liked the way you added a lot of detail

PaolaPaipa chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
ohhh this is the most sweetess fanfic in the world
but i expected that Toothiana ask him why he says that cause before he says he doesnt like her but it wass cuteee and the change in the winter because his feelingsss szdhbfkmsvf
coldnessoflove chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Aw, that was cute... :) Only got around to watching RotG today, and I've been surfing FF ever since... I'm in love with Frostbite/Rainbow Snowcone!
That was really well written, and I liked how unaware and clueless Tooth was!
My only criticism would be the occasional grammatical error, eg "All the snows are disappearing! What happens?!", when it should have been "All the snow is disappearing! What's happening?" Just little things like that. :) You'd also switch between tenses sometimes, although I'm guessing that would be because of typos, or skipping out on words. No biggie though, so good job!
Narcissus was hilarious. XD From the Greek myth, I take it? Good job, and PLEASE WRITE MORE JACKxTOOTH! :) I loved the plot of this fic, and can't wait to read more of yours! :)
xoxo COL
Aligeos chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I ship this so hard 3 loved your fic :)
kyiomi chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
aww! she makes him change the weather by what he is feeling! that is the cutest thing ever!
Tawny chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Hahahahahaha warm fuzzy feeling NO SNOW! Aww
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
So good!
Irene Kagamine chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Oh god, this is the most beautiful fanfic about Jack and Tooth. I mean, I read a lot of fics about ROTG and the pairing FrostFairy, but this is like FREAKING AMAZING. GOD THEY ARE SO DAMN SWEEEEEEEEEET
Hope you write more fanfic about them
NiniCere chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Yeah what's going to happen with the snows? Maybe another chapter could tell (unless you're keeping this as a one shot)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Oh my gosh... This is- THE CUTEST THING *pterodactyl screech* likes the snow melting when he's all fuzzy and warm inside? 3 this is officially my favorite fanfic
Misspurpleroses chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
hehe so funny! awesome fic and i really LOVE it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
LOLOLOL the ending I imagine some guy with a thick foreign accent screaming that out x} SO CUTE i love that he gets jelous, but i wonder if he gets warm caz its like he gets colder in some stories and really i don't know what to think. But it worked out in you story :] I love how innocent Tooth is :DDDD great story!
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