For serious you up and left the story...

Honestly I don't like how Tatsumaki just gave Naruto false hope of returning home. Also I never understood why Naruto would want to return after all the shit he's been through. He basically has a chance at a new life but no he wants to return to a wartorn world.

The f*ck are you doing!?
A naruto x fairytail without fairytail guild!?
Are so impotent that you did what you did!?
You DISGUST ME!
I HOPE YOU DIE IN A TORTUROUS DEATH!
INCOMPETENT IMBACILE!

That's it this chapter really sucks.. Naruto is taking too much shit from everyone and I don't like.. But i really liked previous chapters

Everything after chapter 6 really really sucks... Man I really had high hope for this story... And I am really sorry if you take this wrong way, but your OCs really ruined the story. At least it ruined for me.

Please update its wonderful stories. No other stories like this, its Unique, Refreshing, not Harem, Its Good. I beg you, Update It :)

You've handled the Naruto/Hisui interactions wonderfully, I'm looking forward to the fall out next chapter.

Hope you pick this back up soon!

amazing story till now, although some of the character interactions are ... hmm idk how to put it they just seem... off i suppose. but other than that i loved this story one of my fav naruto x fairytail crossover no doubt ;D and it hasnt even reached the main arcs lol massive but lovable AU for sure. hopefully you will update it though i've this lingering feeling that i wont be able to see next chapter. oh well it was fun till it lasted. thanks for this story and good luck for your life! :D peace.

The story is very good. I wanted to say to you to not make promises that you can't keep but then I read your bio. I will be patient with you, you deserve at least that much for such a wonderful story. Hopefully you find motivation through the words of your readers even when the anime does help. Your readers desperately want you to continue. Its truly too good to be left to dust.
Awesome work. Hoping for an update soon :)
- Raidr of the lost soul

Does your naruto become more level-headed and less *Screaming his immature ideals at any turn* And Naruto wasn't 14, he was like 12. His team entering the exams after months after graduating which was at 11-12. I always thought if naruto had actual attention he wouldn't scream and his ideals would mature (yes he is young but he has been hated by the village and other kids, that ages you) In the show he is very black and white morally rather than what realistically gray. A shunned, neglected, abused kid hated not by one or two ppl but a whole village is not gonna have rose tented glasses.

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Personally, this is the second time I’ve read this fight. I can only assume I wasn’t really paying attention the first time though, because the latter half of the fight is akin to a Pokémon battle from the main games. I hope, when you put out future chapters, that even in spell/technique spams, you try to incorporate them more dynamically.

Cheers

I hate to say it, but I think Naruto needs to work more on his Shinobi and Cakara side more. Wouldn't want him to lose his heritage or dream... heh :D

Bacchus isn't perverse. He's just a man who lets his desires control him... kind of like, I don't now, every human being out there... you 'n me included :D

Anywho... Why din't Naruto who to look for once he gets to Hargeon town? It kind of helps :)

Looks like an interesting story so far.

When the hell is next time author-san? This story is too good to give up!