The chapter was truly enjoyable. Though the 1st couple of paragraphs you kept on using the "present tense" to describe what was going on between Naruto and Sasuke. When narrating events and telling a story usually the past tense is used since it fits more. Still, it was a great chapter and good job writing it!

Seems interesting. What's the pairing, though? Looking forward for an update!

please continue

Well now, that was rather impressive! I knew you could do it!

Good flow to the story, no errors (cheering!) and a well thought up plot line to start off things with.

If there was anything I could say to help, it would be to break down some of those really thick paragraphs. When words are clumped together like that, it makes it difficult to read, especially when it's a sans-serif like this. So next chapter, break it up into 2 or even 3 smaller paragraphs. That way the reader has a chance to digest the information you just gave and not get lost in the maze of words.

Looking forward to seeing what else you can do!

Interesting story. The prologue, even though its pretty standard but the way youw rite it is quite good.

Tell LN to update his damn fic! Hell, update yours! DOOOOOO IIIIIIT...!

just one thing, Kyubi isn't a real demon, it and the other biju were labeled as demons, but they really weren't demons... what's the pairings? Naruto X Erza?

For pairing can you make this a narutoxlevy fiction that pairing that pairing hardly gets used its always erza, Mira, ultear or harem. Never levy for a pairing also please don't make it a harem I'm sick of harems.

This story looks good.i look forward to reading more

This seems pretty cool but was hoping Naruto would get a different element since winds always used was hoping for water or lightning.

Anyway wondering will this be a single pairing or a harem?

Interesting story.
from watch you have written I am guessing Sasuke has been put in to that world to?
If so I know it might make me less interested in the story but I will keep watch for now and tell you what I think as I read it.
Any ways keep up the good work.

Great chapter.