Reviews for Lake Marshetta
90TheGeneral09 chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
Hm. Yet another "Female OC meets Major Payne" story. And instead of being ignored as he often is, Dotson is this time mentioned only as annoying and repulsive. Nice. Well, to each his own, and it's your story. The positives are that the story's proofreading has been done just fine, and that the story itself is interesting and well-written enough to keep my attention through all four chapters. Despite my misgivings about your treatment of Dotson- I think he has far more potential as a character than most do, apparently- I would still like to see this story written through to completion. Update it when you have time.
BeanDipMcGee chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
MORE! MAS! OPPOSITE OF LESS!
PLEASE!
bats13 chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
Great so far! I hope you update again soon!
bats13 chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I'm really liking this so far! There aren't too many Major Payne fics. I really like the way you write, and how you described the scene and everything! Keep up the good work!