|Reviews for lust is just a child's game|
| allisonarrgent chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
ELLIE YOU NEED TO STOP. This was so incredibly gorgeous and basically everything anyone could have ever wanted from Emma/Graham if they'd gotten a proper chance. You got Emma down perfectly, with being in denial because she's too scared to love and be vulnerable and trying to convince herself that what she had with Graham was just lust ("Later she showers and pretends she enjoys his lips on her neck more than his arm around her waist and his heartbeat against her shoulder blades." - I'm not fine at all). And Graham MY SWEET SUMMER CHILD this made me so sad because we could have had it allllll and you captured him and his adoration for Emma so brilliantly that I don't even have words to describe how much I loved it. Also oh my god, a massive shout out for the title and the song lyrics you used at the beginning - aside from it being a beautiful song to begin with, it absolutely fit Emma and Graham and their relationship and you couldn't have picked a better one, really. I love you, don't ever stop writing! xx
| lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
hello there i am sorry this review is a bit late but yes hi it's midnight and i'm hopped up on caffeine (ahh bad decisions) and i was reading this properly and wow ellie this is so lovely and so perfect and please write more ouat fic please please please (i will bake you cookies if you ship hook/aurora?)
okay so basically graham is just the most perfect thing ever and you know i've been shipping emma with hook lately (but also hook/aurora otp i'm sorry i will drive you crazy with this ship if you ever talk to me about ouat) but then i read this and just emma/graham wow he was so sweet so wonderful so perfect i am so upset at what happened but it's okay he's alive now and they're happy and i'm happy and yes
i loveloveloved just everything about how he acted around her, all the sexual tension at the beginning and then the i love yous because oh graham come back and let me love you please and then the way he was just kind of resigned to loving her no matter how stupid she was being and so he just dealt with it in his own little way i.e. locking her up in a cell and it was just perfect sigh i love him so much i miss him so much ellie why did you write this so perfectly i want graham back
and then emma who was just completely in character (i'll be totally honest and say she kind of annoys me sometimes and she annoyed me a bit in this fic but that has nothing to do with you i promise you did a wonderful job keeping her in character and it's just her character that bugs me sometimes not your writing) and i loved all her reactions to graham especially in the beginning where she's basically just insanely attracted to him i mean who wouldn't be right and how she was reluctant to fall in love properly/say it back it just fits her so well and i just love her with graham he makes her so sweet and lovely and also her confession and how stumbling and awkward it was just god you are amazing because obviously emma is emotionally stunted and stuff and yes it was perfect
and just thank you so much i love this i do and merry christmas (a bit late whoops) to you too! i hope you write lots more ouat soon! :)
(cough hook/aurora cough)
| squeakyswings chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I stopped watching Once Upon A Time when Graham died and this makes everything right again. Ugh and the last line. Perfect perfect perfect.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
love this! it is so cute!
| Opalbrat chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Awww. :) I love this. Great job! :)
| Miss Lyla chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I really liked what you did here. Sure, I feel for Heny in the story(even if he is only mentioned in it) since the fairy tales arent real, and thay may be why I think that this is a sad story.
Well, at least Graham is alive and he and Emma are together.
Overall, I really enjoy the fic. Great work!