|Reviews for Dive Into The Heart|
| Honey Almond Chocolate chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
This really outlined the heartbreak and despair that Harry felt when he saw those people, those people he loved, and when he made that decision. You told it well.
Bit of constructive criticism- you could improve on spelling and grammar, but that's not too much of a biggie.
It was a touching tale, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you. :)