Reviews for Mere Mortals
pulmicort7 chapter 52 . 10/12/2006
I love this story! I just sat down and read the whole thing in one sitting. I couldn't stop reading! Gah! You are making me lose sleep! Why do you have to be such a good writer?

"I can stall with the best of them. Forget the alien girls. She'd keep Clark so tied up in human mating rituals - dating, that the Eradicator would regret ever giving them the go ahead."

That was like the best line ever! I almost died laughing! Keep the chapters coming!
Cherri202 chapter 52 . 9/11/2006
Boy Clark is in a ruff now! lol! Update soon!
Jay-F chapter 52 . 5/8/2006
this is definatly one of the better smallvile fics i have read, keep it coming.

Thanks for wrriting,

Drake-Azathoth chapter 52 . 3/30/2006
A fun story. The Eradicator makes for a genuinely implacable adversary, all the more chilling because of her 'logical' way of looking at things.

I love the idea of Clark and Chloe dating, but I don't think that'll put off the machine so easily...
DarkAngel35 chapter 52 . 3/25/2006
Yay, you're writing again! And yay for Chloe and human mating rituals. The Eradicator has no idea who she's messing with, does she? ;)

I like the little details you include too, like the flock of geese that Ford and Luci have never seen before and the sunburns. Definitely adds to the atmosphere.

Hope you write more soon!
elbowface chapter 52 . 3/24/2006
woo hoo! so glad to see you're still writing this series, and that clark now has chloe to rely on in taking on the eradicator. absolutely love this story, and looking forward to whatever you're cooking up.
ed209uardo chapter 52 . 3/18/2006

Well, there goes a sizeable chunk of my free time. Ran across this story the other day, and now I've been completely sucked in. Now I have to go through the other ones you have here. Darn it.


Seriously, this is mostly good stuff. The writing style is engaging and readable. (which unfortunately doesn't seem to be the norm around here) I'm not enthralled with the living Kryptonite angle, but it is original, and I do like Lola. The only thing I'm really not feeling is Kal-El. I just don't personally think that the Clark we all know and love would have changed to the degree that you've characterized. (or as quickly, for that matter) That said, I look forward to you eventually finishing this fic. Oh, and good luck with the move.
drufan chapter 52 . 3/16/2006
Well, I'm still reading. Nearly fainted dead away when I saw an update. Then I looked at the top- 4 years! You've been writing this story for 4 years!

Great update. Hope to see another one before summer. This story is intriguing and convoluted. I can't let it go.
CantonJohn chapter 48 . 3/15/2006
Wow haven't seen an update in awhile, really enjoyed reading this.

Is this a tease? Are you going to post and abandon again? :)

Well thanks for your story, hope to see more chapters soon.
RedKaddict chapter 52 . 3/15/2006
Haha, that is funny! I can't wait to see what the Eradicator thinks of "human mating rituals"! Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for the next chapter!
Dr. Masaki chapter 52 . 3/14/2006
You do realise that its genetically impossible for Chloe or any human for that matter to produce offspring with Clark? A human female would have a better chance of mateing with a monkey or a horse than an alien lifeform like a kryptonian it doesn't matter how closely they resemble eachother biologically its impossible or near enough to impossible. Unless the eradicator pulls a Dr. Moreau and has a genetics lab squared away in order to try and splice together a viable hybrid Clark isnt going to be produceing any children in the forseable future with anyone she picks for him sorry to say.
Max chapter 52 . 3/14/2006
Glad to see the update - I know you can't post individual replies to reviews anymore - I'm not sure, but I don't think you have to go back and remove existing ones.
Rebel Goddess chapter 52 . 3/14/2006
I made the most ridiculous noise when I saw that there was a new chapter of this. Then I made another noise (not so ridiculous laughter) when I read Britney's suggestion for a title for Clark's article. Geese are pretty, but if I were him I wouldn't get close enough to find out if they were soft. Have I mentioned I'm thrilled that there's a new chapter of this? Because I really, really am. Poor Clark isn't going to know what hit him between Chloe, Reo and the Eradicator. I'm so happy this is back. More please. I'll wait, I'm very patient and RL comes first, but sooner is better. Great chapter. I'm grinning like the Cheshire Cat now.
The Die Hard chapter 52 . 3/14/2006
Hah! Go Chloe! I'd bet on her against an alien machine in the cunning department any day. Hm. She and Reo are either going to be great allies, or... Oh, that's going to be a problem. And poor Luci. Boy, would Lana of canon SV be pissed off. In the meantime, Kal the insane AI has devious plans of his own? Probably just as well for keeping the Eradicator busy. I do very much like this AU. Here's to Chloe and her years of stalling!
wordoftruthhunter26 chapter 52 . 3/14/2006
stupid site did not take my last review what the hell is a review throttle. anyway love this story have been waiting a long time for an update thank good you put one up. this story is well thought out please keep writing. you keep puting different things in just love when authors do that. having the crazy bitch liking chloe was funny as hell. the old lady needing to get prgnegant was scary but please don't leave it here please update soon.
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