Reviews for Down
JBubbles chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
I like the poem, very simple but all the same the characters are alive
tsuhiyo chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
kojocharis chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Aw! That is so sweet and cute. I love how you avoided saying their names yet made it clear who they are.
Middy chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Hehehe... I love it!
KNR chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Dear Sunfreak,

Me again! Like I said, I went straight to your Bio and read more of your postings. I seem to be injoying them.

I give you a 10 out of 10 stars.

See you in another review soon.

~ Starlit-Knight
Sakuya1989 chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
...blunt...but cute _
Kiyomi chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
*scratches head* I think I've read this before...but it's great! O.O
baka deshi chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Hehe...very adorable, I smiled all the way through this one. Comparing this to the "soccer" poem, I definately like this better...the soccer poem was more interesting as a poem, but it didn't fit very well as a character piece. This was so vivid I could practically see it, and it was lovely _
Naomi Hunter chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
woot. perty!
Angel of Peace chapter 1 . 8/31/2002
hehe! the ending's so cute! ack! ur such a good writer! i loved it!
Caroltrue - too lazy to login chapter 1 . 7/26/2002

That soooooooo sweet. I'm a firm believer in Touya x Yue... and Touya x Yukito... and Yue x Tukito...

*gets hentai thoughts*

Of course theres nothing wrong with all three of them being together either ne?

Excellent poem. Just lovely. _
Seph Lorraine chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
Aa! Go Yue! Heh heh heh, I really like that poem. Though I think it could have been a pretty good ficlet. Aa! but, I like the poem, it has flavour, romance, and humour. Very artistic, and a nice selection of words to enhance the flow of reading. A very good piece, says I. I loved it to bits.
Aria7 chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
Once again, a brilliant opem by the oh so brilliant Sunfreak. All worship at your feet!_