|Reviews for Literally Sucked into a Video Game|
| Leon Venxus chapter 2 . 3/10
Quite short... pretty good. Though you could use a mentor to help you on how to write a nice story. Still pretty good for a beginner
| Leon Venxus chapter 1 . 3/10
No criticsisim? No problem. Just one thing though you forgot raven is 24 as a blade master xD
| An0n Author chapter 9 . 12/4/2012
Wow great story. Just fabulous and I am surprised that no one else has reviewed this because this is worthy for many views for people who enjoy this type of writing. Great story and I hope the others will be as great as this one. Though this is just me, I think the chapters are a little short but that's just me XD.