|Reviews for Not Optimal|
| xneseyx chapter 2 . 2/24
I like Salazar's defense of his position on the admissability of the muggleborn students. It makes way more sense then "we're better than they are, no ifs ands or buts".
| sanbi221 chapter 4 . 2/14
I think you should do two more Christmas carol stories using Aizen and another with Madara Uchiha. Aside from that I didn't expect that kind of ending but it was a very good story. I liked the ending and I think you should make a sequel to this.
| mageofmyth chapter 4 . 2/3
I would love to know how it all turned out. If Tom decided that any Horcrux led to his ugliness. I wonder if Harry would even be born, or if the Potter line would end to allow for a better Riddle.
| LadyKnightofCelestia chapter 4 . 12/8/2013
This was funny.
| LadyKnightofCelestia chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
This is enjoyable.
| MadScientist14159 chapter 4 . 12/8/2013
I was happily surprised at the ending. When I started reading this, I was sure that Tom would would be forced to learn morals despite being a psychopath and thus incapable of learning morals, but the lesson being "Don't make stupid mistakes." was rather satisfying.
| 64teeth chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
great story, very original:)
| Hektols chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
Very good job, the ending with the bad guy not abandoning his path and now being warned about his future mistakes was brilliant.
| Hektols chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
Very funny chapter with the Scrooge being genre savvy.
| Hektols chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
Interesting, Tom is getting praise instead of being criticized.
| Hektols chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I usually avoid stories that copy 'A Christmas Carol' plot because they are practically the same but this one with a really evil guy like Voldemort caught my eye.
| Mathlover4 chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
Loved it! Although, with the ending, I couldn't tell if Riddle was ready to change the canon we know, or if it was just a self-fulfilling prophecy...you should continue this to see how it affects present day! (Unless my self-fulfiling prophecy theory is true)
| Noble Korhedron chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
ULP! You weren't helping... :-(
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Sadly not continued upon, as what and how Tom decides to do would be far more interesting (for me that is) than this arguably hooking short story. :)
| Random number generator chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
I wonder how this Tom would end, he seems to be even more dangerous than before :)