Reviews for Jilted
BillBrink chapter 9 . 6/27/2016
If Ginny left England in the morning at breakfast, she wouldn't be arriving in Australia at their breakfast by portkey. That's the only way she could travel. Apparation doesn't work that far.
iluvpeeta06 chapter 13 . 10/13/2015
It was a very good story. But I think you need an epilogue for us fans haha. The ending wasn't as strong like I felt you left us on a cliff hanger haha but good job. Love your work.
starlite22 chapter 14 . 1/26/2015
Oh thought that 14 was another chapter, what happened next or is that it? An epilogue of the future would be nice.
starlite22 chapter 12 . 1/26/2015
Surprised Harry doesn't have enough money from his parents or Sirius to be able to but a house.
starlite22 chapter 10 . 1/26/2015
Great story, only thing I find slightly strange is Hermuone ideas top in every class except DDA which Harry was, and yet Susan not as cleaver as Hermione is her supervisor, seems a bit strange, other than that this is great.
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 13 . 1/11/2015
I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the ending but thought it was a little sudden but all the same good story :)
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 13 . 4/22/2014
You did a good job writing this, although there were some typos and error throughout the story. Besides those, you did a great job with the plot and creativity :)
SpritelyShoes chapter 14 . 8/8/2013
Wonderful story, very well written, easy to follow, characters seemed mostly true, best HP/HG!
onedirectionfan10 chapter 13 . 5/29/2013
I love it! The best story I've ever read! Please do more harry/Hermione stories.
Cringo chapter 10 . 4/28/2013
This is more of an off critique than anything. Susan Bones went to school with Hermione and Harry, having her as their boss does not really make sense. I think it would have been better if you had made their boss someone totally OC or even Ameila Bones would have been much better than Susan. Again, just a thought.
starlite22 chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
Enjoying the story, at the beginning you said they didn't have their wands on the island then Harry used his confused?
DK chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
This was great
godessisis chapter 14 . 2/5/2013
I found your story truely amazing. I read it in one sitting.
Meel Jacques chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Nyahh, It's so sweet!
Jane chapter 6 . 1/25/2013
"I don't know why I'm doing all the cooking – since you're the woman of the house." Harry joked, measuring out the flour.
Perpetuating traditional gender roles is funny! Not.
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