|Reviews for Alternate Universe Star Trek Enterprise 'Broken Bow'|
| TrekLover101 chapter 2 . 1/16/2013
| brankel1 chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
It's an intriguing start and I will be following the story with interest. I really wish you'd sort your tenses out, though. With this style of writing, just about everything that isn't quoted speech should be in the past tense. Every time you slip back into the current tense it trips me up and throws me out of the story.
| omry.grinberg chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
One thing: MORE!
You made it work so well ans seamlessly, it felt natural. I really want to see how THIS STE would unfold.
| Belen09 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
This is interesting . . . I like it!
| TrekLover101 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I like it...especially Archer putting T'Pol in here place. I like the increased positions, it actually feels like a military/naval vessel. Great job! Look forward to more.
| LoyaulteMeLie chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
It's certainly an intriguing concept, and the technical detail is striking. You've obviously put an enormous amount of thought into it. For me, however, it was just a little let down by occasional flaws in the grammar - things like the switches from past to present tense during the text diverted my attention from the story. But on the whole, it was very interesting indeed.