|Reviews for Voice Of Reason|
| tanzar81 chapter 11 . 6/29
You made a few critical mistakes. First off you didn't leave any loop hole to keep Severus alive. Harry should have questioned the eaters for info on other followers or the moldy one. (No trial, means no chance to say I'm reformed and spying for the good guys)
I have a few other issues but they can be written off as its your story you can do what you want to. And I can handle that.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/27
please make more chapters
| ralula chapter 23 . 6/27
I like this story other than the four wives, it is great. The plot and Harry's character are excellent, the finish of Dumbledore will be very interesting...
| Reichenfaust chapter 23 . 6/23
Glad to see this continued. Beware Dumbledore, Harry is comin for ya!
| phoebe.willow chapter 23 . 6/19
I love this story. Please write more about this story. I hope you will be finish this story. please write more soon.
| emilbootanimefreak chapter 10 . 6/14
Hahahahahaha so much for the screaming girl LOL! Anyways I"m really happy with Fred and George still being on Harry's side. Although I'm still a bit confused with Ginny, at the start of this fic I thought it was stated that Ginny had no idea of Dumbledores plan and she technically didn't do anything wrong and I thought she would try to redeem herself? Although it has been a while since I read this fic so correct me if I"m wrong it's happened before X3
| BlazeStryker chapter 7 . 6/13
Your reinterpretation of the canon is one thing, but Bella threw a stunner, not a Killing Curse. I'm not saying she wouldn't have gleefully tortured Sirius after-she would have.
| Bobmin356 chapter 4 . 6/12
Just once I would like to see a more realistic means of pairing up Harry with more than one girl. In a flash you made both girls bi and had then in bed before they even bedded Harry. You went from zero relationship with either girl, in chapter 3, to bi and het sex in a single chapter with zero relationship building in between. It really makes the whole idea hard to believe and seriously strains the rest of this story without even reading any more.
Sigh... it's been done a billion times and it's so very unrealistic. Where is the jealousy? Where is the anger about having their choice taken from them? Where are the frank discussions where they try to talk out these and other issues?
| Fallow51 chapter 23 . 6/10
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 23 . 6/2
Although your spelling is atrocious and your wording sometimes leaves a bit to be desired, I have enjoyed this story and look forward to future updates...
Keep writing as life allows...
| lou2003us chapter 23 . 6/1
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter.
Keep up the great work!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 23 . 6/1
ULP! Note to self; DO NOT get on Harry's bad side...
| foxee-chik chapter 23 . 6/1
Wow! Keep goin! I liked it! I can't w8 2 read the nxt chap!
| hpf2114 chapter 23 . 5/31
This is a great story! Daphne and Hermione are my two favorite pairings with Harry, and you have both in this story. Putting Daphne in the Tri-wiz is very original. Excellent piece of writing. Hope you find the time to keep this story going. I know how had it is to be a working parent. Full marks!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/30
The reactions of Daphne and Hermione are pretty weird. Yeah, they found a note saying that Harry knows alllll the answers to allllll their questions. Right. Why would they immediately believe a mysterious note? Most likely explanation would be that they were memory charmed by someone. If that someone messed with their minds, would they leave a note with their own name behind? No way in hell. Yeah, it didn't happen that way, instead something extraordinarily unbelievable did (Death messed with time? right..), but normal people seek normal explanations first. I'd buy the instant belief if it was Luna Lovegood, but it's not, it's Daphne and Hermione. It ought to take a lot to convince them of something so crazy.