|Reviews for A war to eliminate and the battle to stop it|
| lucidatray7 chapter 8 . 12/13/2012
You should try to put whose POV it is so people can get a clear view of who's telling their story; if you don't readers will get easily confused until they catch context clues near the end.
| lucidatray7 chapter 4 . 12/6/2012
Not bad, very good to be accurate.
| metsfan101 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
lmao im lovign the cross over
| lucidatray7 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Full Metal Alchemist-Bleach Crossover...not bad. Kido could serve as "alchemy" in that world in a way, so it's actually a good crossover.