Reviews for Midnight Musings
Reggie black chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
I really like your fic. What a shame thajt Severus lost is only friend when he most needed :'( I don't like how some people judged him for what he did, Yes! What he said was wrong but, what about the marauders?,what about Hermione and Marrieta? And the Weasley twins and Montague? They almost kill him!
Ralinde chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Interesting take on this pairing. I think you portrayed Severus well, with his drive to make things right with Lily and that he knows he's done something unforgiveable. But then he just gives up and goes over to the Dark Side? That's sad.
I liked the Fat Lady in this as well, though I think she would be a bit more selfconscious.

One thing on SPaG: You write speech like this:
["I can't let anyone in without the password. Rules are rules dear." She said.]
It ought to be:
["I can't let anyone in without the password. Rules are rules dear," she said.]
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Wow. Brutal and sad. Really good work, keep writing
onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This is one of these most amazing things I've read.
Starcresentmoon chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
that was an interesting perception ty i enjoyed it. i thought that maybe lily did string them on abit.