Reviews for The Unknown
Vu1kan18 chapter 1 . 5/11
Well this is a hell of a first chapter good job
TheAssassinGmer chapter 1 . 4/30
am I the only one who almost died from shock when reading 'they all had tears in their eyes even Ares'
halo4hire chapter 17 . 4/20
This was read. Not the best I've read but most certainly not the worst. It had its moment where it just seemed to drone on, where other moments seemed to move too quickly. Was pj overpowered? Severly. Was the romance between pj and Arty too quick? Did Arty go from eons of man hating to falling in love? Yes. However. The redemption of Gaia was a neat twist, one I don't see a lot, and you took several loose floating factors of Greek mythology and combined them into a decent story. I did have fun reading this, don't get me wrong, I'm only saying it has some room to improve. Like having some romantic humor in the mix, a drawn out red faced yelling argument, Arty turning pj into a jackelope only for him to turn himself back. Detailing Arty's face when he did said act while pj falls over laughing. Simple things. When you started the story you expected your readers to have read the Canon and know Greek mythology, at least that's how it read to me, instead of giving some information about it. Try to imagine your explaining the world to them, that they don't know the lore. Like I said, it wasn't a bad story, and I most certainly am not trying to foame you,justnting out where it can be improved. Good show, my good fellow
Guest chapter 17 . 3/25
I declare this story as the most AWESOME ONE in ALL ETERNITY!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24
dude PERTEMIS duh
PercyJackson313 chapter 17 . 2/15
Did anyone else realize that Percy never, not once calls Artemis, Artemis? It was always just, my Love, or some variation there of. He called most people some variation of that too...
Brother Of Void chapter 15 . 1/30
damasen is for ares
Brother Of Void chapter 15 . 1/30
leon is for apollo
pallas is for athena
Mohit chapter 17 . 1/2
Amazing Indescribable story please make are a incredible aurther It took me 6 hours to read your story by the way but I did'nt care because it was incredibly fantastically amazingly magnificently breath-taking.
Maria Cristina chapter 17 . 12/17/2017
Very good story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank You
Guest chapter 7 . 12/6/2017
What about Annabeth arrested u people crazy nooooooo percybeth.
SimplyHorizontal chapter 6 . 11/14/2017
Knew it was Percy...
veryspecialagentriley chapter 6 . 9/20/2017
I fucking knew it
Shit Wagon chapter 17 . 8/14/2017
MMM ya girl they had steamy sexy times
Guest chapter 17 . 8/9/2017
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