Reviews for Keep Me
Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 25 . 8/8
Loved it! Thanks so much for writing!
HartofBooks chapter 25 . 7/24
I read this story... god knows when.. years ago. But I rediscovered it and decided to read it through again and no regrets! It's such a good and well thought out story! Love the pace and characterisation! So just wanted to once again say congrats! Loved it.
TH.CB.talyn.birchfield chapter 25 . 5/13
This is the 3rd times I've read this story. I still love it.
bashfyl chapter 25 . 4/22
Really enjoyed this story. thanks for sharin
Edana1009 chapter 19 . 4/9
Things are getting really exciting! Great chapter.
Edana1009 chapter 16 . 4/9
Awesome chapter!
Edana1009 chapter 15 . 3/26
Great chapter, Skokie and Eric are so sweet.
Edana1009 chapter 13 . 3/23
I am loving this story! I was so excited when Godric finally entered the story, he's a fantastic character. I'm not sure if you're not writing out all the southern accents as much as the story progresses or if I'm able to adapt to it better as I read but I'm glad for it and I can't wait to finish this story.
Edana1009 chapter 3 . 3/22
I'm enjoying the story so far but I'm having a hard time with your dialogue. Of the thousands of fanfictions I've read over the years I have never read one that manages to pull off writing out an accent and this story is no exception. There is too big a difference between the spoken and written word. You have to give the reader the information and then let their imagination take over as they read. For me, trying to force me to hear your dialogue a certain way is nothing but distracting and I finally had to say something. Now, Sookies poor grammar is a different story, that is part of the plot and separate then the accents, although the combination of the two send my mind to a five year old with a speech impediment instead of an under-educated woman with a southern accent. I can't get away from it, every time she speaks it forces me to picture something in my head that doesn't match the story at all. This is why you should let the reader take your words and interpret them to match the story and images they are imagining as they read instead of forcing them to read it a particular way. Alright, that was a bit of a rant and a mouthful but I find myself frustrated since I freaking love this story but I can't escape something I find really frustrating. Now onto the good stuff, your characterization of Sookie is awesome! I love her to pieces and her lack of inhibitions is a refreshing change from all the shy southern bell stories out there. Eric is awesome too, and together they are absolutely amazing. I haven't gotten to Pam yet but I cannot wait! I'm so excited to read the rest of your story and will probably be dead tired in the morning from staying up late reading.
kaiirine chapter 25 . 3/20
I loved every bit of it! thanks so much for writing this...
kaiirine chapter 13 . 3/20
You Sookie is jus BadAss! And I love her here... _
Sassyvampmama chapter 25 . 2/9
Thanks for sharing, now I'm onto the sequel!
aiIsNw chapter 19 . 12/22/2016
whoa man best stories ever
vampwalker709 chapter 25 . 12/16/2016
Ok love this story a big fan of op sookie thanks for writing this.
vampwalker709 chapter 7 . 12/15/2016
Hoping this is book sophie and not that twat from the tv show
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