Reviews for Unexpected Effects
BlessedHope chapter 32 . 1/17/2016
I really couldn't help but laugh at that. Ending! It was just all too perfect.
Love love love this story! I just laugh and sigh at just the right times, and the emotion is so spot on for them both!
Thank you ever so much for writing this and for finishing it.
Merci beaucoup!
Dagger-Seishin chapter 32 . 12/23/2015
i rather enjoy that you have 2 versions of the story. but i obviosuly stuck wiht the romantic one and it turned out quite well. tho i feel bad for harry having to let the healers poke and prode him forever.
Mayan.Goddess chapter 24 . 12/8/2015
This story is amazing. They also have the most difficult relationship I have ever encountered.
phoenix-rob chapter 32 . 11/15/2015
Loved the longer 'snarry' version - the snarking at each other is pure Severus and Harry, but all the time really sweet.
Fenris Jin chapter 32 . 11/11/2015
It's a beautiful ending. I truly enjoyed the ride.

This is far more fulfilling than the other ending. I can't stop smiling.. xD

I think I've never expressed my like for Neville in this story yet, so I'd like to say he was adorable.. He kept the seriousness at bay without looking like an idiot in ways that Ron does.. Someday he and Severus would good friends I believe. :D

I do not think an epilogue is that much required. I find open ended stories far more happier than closed ended ones. Epilogues usually kill the imagination and any hopes and dreams the reader has. Exhibit A would point to Canon!HP's Epilogue itself. Although, I would have liked to know if there were ever Potter-Snape babies to be had, or if Neville ever met 'the one', I think it's better this way. :)

Thanks for sharing this story and for finishing it! It really was a treat to read! :)
Fenris Jin chapter 31 . 11/11/2015
I'd say it was sweet.. But that doesn't seem to compare! XD

The proposal was rather funny, despite the tears and the yelling.. Actually, that's probably why it's so funny.. xD

Now Harry knows why Severus doesn't make romantic speeches often. That eloquence combined with his velvety voice.. Well, it's safe to say wizards and witches would be panting after him! Lockheart's most charming smile won't even dare to compare.. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 30 . 11/11/2015
Dragon attack! That was a pretty cool addition. Should we blame Hagrid? I'm a little inclined to do so after he went on about hinting Severus was taking advantage of Harry.. Which was totally unfair given that Harry was the one who took advantage of the man instead! XD

It's a sign, they should leave Hogwarts and buy a land in the country side. Maybe the attack would prompt our dear romantically inclined Potions Master to do one of his grand gestures again. He's the type to do so. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 29 . 11/11/2015
I should say Harry was a very very happy camper after their illustrious little date. I certainly was. XD

It's too bad that they were at odds with Minerva regarding their relationship though.. Hopefully that would sort itself out and that Minerva is already used to Severus' personality.
Fenris Jin chapter 28 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an arse.. and of course an idiot. XD

I see how Severus can be a little upset when Harry had forced him into admitting that he loved him. If this had been his first confession, there in Notre Dame, for their first date under the moonlight, and the oh so romantic setting all the while wearing that oh so sexy suit.. I could just imagine the squee moment! XD

Oh well, there still should have been a squee moment there, but as always Harry had ruined it by accusing Severus of being Polyjuiced.. xD

Still a lovely date!
Fenris Jin chapter 27 . 11/11/2015
I always like to imagine Severus in a suit.. Yums. Lucky Harry. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 26 . 11/11/2015
A rather sweet and then yummy intermission for Snarry. I rather enjoyed this chapter. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 25 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot. Yes, I'm related to Captain Obvious. But when even Ron is able to correctly infer that Harry is progressing well with his relationship with Severus, yet said young man is still confused on the status of said relations, I feel the need to reiterate it. That and Harry practically cock-blocked himself until Severus took action. :D

Harry is also a hypocrite. He says he wants Severus not to change.. But what he demands of him are mostly things that the man normally doesn't do, at least not in his own way.. Like discussing feelings and whatnot at inopportune times. As the man said, intentions are far more meaningful to him than words, but Harry demands him to change that and talk it out. Totally an OOC thing for Severus! xD
Fenris Jin chapter 24 . 11/11/2015
Yay! Severus finally snaps! .. Although, too bad it happened right after a very hot lip on lip action. Ah well.. So long as Severus finally spelled it out to Harry. Honestly, he's already given far too much. He's not going to change, even if he did love Potter. It's good for their relationship that Severus finally demanded his own need for understanding and acceptance of who he is. Take it or leave it.

Anyway, the sleeping dilemma for Harry was hilarious! If Harry did request for Severus to refrain from wearing the silk pyjamas I'd wish they'd compromise by making Severus take of the silk top and sleep only in silk pants. Yum! More torture for Harry and more massage too! XD

I can definitely see Severus spooning. He's that kind of a lover in my definition.. or was that my fantasy? Whichever. XD I think it's more believable for him than being a giving out regular hugs actually. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot.. I cannot say that enough. xD

He's an arse too.. and stupid.. or atleast doing stupid things. Neville called it right. Harry should be reminded that Severus doesn't do stupid things. If he keeps this up, he really won't get the man and might as well say goodbye to that happily ever after. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot. Have I said that already? Well, he's needy.. I already said that too? Well, he's a needy idiot who's PMSing when he has not right to be.. There, that sounds more original.. Somewhat. Ah, being in love is so hard. xD

I love Neville, he's far more intuitive. I wish Harry was more like that.. Hmm.. I might go run around to find me a good Severus and Neville mentor story after this.
670 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »