Reviews for Unexpected Effects
Fenris Jin chapter 29 . 11/11/2015
I should say Harry was a very very happy camper after their illustrious little date. I certainly was. XD

It's too bad that they were at odds with Minerva regarding their relationship though.. Hopefully that would sort itself out and that Minerva is already used to Severus' personality.
Fenris Jin chapter 28 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an arse.. and of course an idiot. XD

I see how Severus can be a little upset when Harry had forced him into admitting that he loved him. If this had been his first confession, there in Notre Dame, for their first date under the moonlight, and the oh so romantic setting all the while wearing that oh so sexy suit.. I could just imagine the squee moment! XD

Oh well, there still should have been a squee moment there, but as always Harry had ruined it by accusing Severus of being Polyjuiced.. xD

Still a lovely date!
Fenris Jin chapter 27 . 11/11/2015
I always like to imagine Severus in a suit.. Yums. Lucky Harry. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 26 . 11/11/2015
A rather sweet and then yummy intermission for Snarry. I rather enjoyed this chapter. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 25 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot. Yes, I'm related to Captain Obvious. But when even Ron is able to correctly infer that Harry is progressing well with his relationship with Severus, yet said young man is still confused on the status of said relations, I feel the need to reiterate it. That and Harry practically cock-blocked himself until Severus took action. :D

Harry is also a hypocrite. He says he wants Severus not to change.. But what he demands of him are mostly things that the man normally doesn't do, at least not in his own way.. Like discussing feelings and whatnot at inopportune times. As the man said, intentions are far more meaningful to him than words, but Harry demands him to change that and talk it out. Totally an OOC thing for Severus! xD
Fenris Jin chapter 24 . 11/11/2015
Yay! Severus finally snaps! .. Although, too bad it happened right after a very hot lip on lip action. Ah well.. So long as Severus finally spelled it out to Harry. Honestly, he's already given far too much. He's not going to change, even if he did love Potter. It's good for their relationship that Severus finally demanded his own need for understanding and acceptance of who he is. Take it or leave it.

Anyway, the sleeping dilemma for Harry was hilarious! If Harry did request for Severus to refrain from wearing the silk pyjamas I'd wish they'd compromise by making Severus take of the silk top and sleep only in silk pants. Yum! More torture for Harry and more massage too! XD

I can definitely see Severus spooning. He's that kind of a lover in my definition.. or was that my fantasy? Whichever. XD I think it's more believable for him than being a giving out regular hugs actually. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot.. I cannot say that enough. xD

He's an arse too.. and stupid.. or atleast doing stupid things. Neville called it right. Harry should be reminded that Severus doesn't do stupid things. If he keeps this up, he really won't get the man and might as well say goodbye to that happily ever after. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot. Have I said that already? Well, he's needy.. I already said that too? Well, he's a needy idiot who's PMSing when he has not right to be.. There, that sounds more original.. Somewhat. Ah, being in love is so hard. xD

I love Neville, he's far more intuitive. I wish Harry was more like that.. Hmm.. I might go run around to find me a good Severus and Neville mentor story after this.
Fenris Jin chapter 21 . 11/11/2015
Harry is an idiot. Severus should be sainted for all the patience he has for our wayward and needy Gryffindor.. Yes, he's needy! Was three years not enough? xD

He wants to talk yet when Severus acquiesces, Harry ends up babbling and stuttering unable to form a coherent sentence. He's very lucky the man can decipher his broken speech pattern. xD

Really, I'm falling in love with Severus. The things he's done for Harry, it's quite romantic, especially considering he's doing it even if it's way past his comfort zone. It worries me that Harry won't be the worthy to be with him. Severus doesn't need words, but Harry needs everything spelled out for him.. I fear he may never truly understand the man. Severus deserves understanding too! He's already proven himself loyal, Harry on the other hand still needs to prove himself! XD

As I see it, Severus is the one the keeps giving whatever Harry demands in their relationship.. I find that it's not healthy in the long run. Maybe he should have Potter work for it? XD
Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 11/11/2015
Harry keeps sabotaging himself with Severus. Our Potions Master isn't running away from him, he's the one pushing the man away when he over analyzes and put words in Severus' mouth. No wonder the man doesn't like to talk to Harry too much. He's too frustrating to talk to. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 11/11/2015
I have the impression that if Harry stopped trying to discuss or talk out about Severus' intentions, every time the man does something for him.. I think they would have already been married with a kid underway.. XD

Severus likes to do things unnoticed so he can swiftly act on it, if one thinks about it, some of the milestones between them were initiated by him. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 11/11/2015
Baby steps! XD

I'm rather proud of Harry doing it slowly. Christmas really is a magical time, no wonder our Golden Boy times his more daring approach during the holidays! XD

The tiny intimate and still innocent gestures between them are squee worthy! :D

Neville is kind of fun to have regarding this not so stupid thing with Severus.. A few more nudge here and there, Harry is bound to crack and spill his guts to dear Longbottom.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 11/10/2015
It's an alright ending.. Though I must say curiosity attempted to murder the cat. HP's OC love interest strongly remind me of Ginny. A someone suddenly swooping in to marry famous Harry Potter.. No offense, just an honest pet peeve I suppose. XD

I think I'll go and treat myself to a Snarry ending.. Off I go! :D
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 11/10/2015
I'm torn.. I both like Mentor Severus and Snarry.. I'll indulge in both! XD

I'm actually just a tad worried about who will be paired with Harry in the event that Severus takes on the role of his guardian. I'm really not a big fan of red-heads that do not have twins or named William. Ravenheads and blondes are my thing when in the HP universe! I was never a fan of Ginny, that's why I'm all for Snarry. I'd vote for a Huna if it's a het pair but if it's a free reign slash and Sev becomes the responsible adult, Draco would be nice too. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 11/10/2015
It's a very nice holiday for Harry. :)

I think he should be more grateful for his Basilisk transformation.. Otherwise, he wouldn't be sharing a tender family moment with Severus like that.. :)
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