Reviews for Between worlds
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18
You got all that... from watching him walk across a power line? I thought he was just demonstrating his incredible balance. That was awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Despite being a little short, the story was really good! I've never thought of Jack's position like this.
paracuties chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Aww... :(

I'm so jealous! Your writing can express it so clearly. 'It', as in the entire personality of Jack Frost and his emotions.

Like, this is good. Really good. Keep writing!
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Oh Jack... I just want to hug him!

Thank you for writing & sharing.
Oluhasuu chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
stunning
Fox of the Last Temple chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
beautiful, poetry,...very inspirational. keep up the good work.
XandyNZ chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Lovely picture you've written about here. I never really though about that image in the movie, but you've really got me thinking about it now. 3
freedominafallenworld chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
that is actually amazing. You look up amazing in the dictionary and this will come up. The photo suits it so much. poor jack
MavenAlysse chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Damn. Just ... wow. Beautifully sad. Thank you for sharing.
RandomKrazyPerson chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
wondrous! im faving you! 3
ParadiseAvenger chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I thought that, too. Cue the song "Two Worlds" from Tarzan.
Jimelda chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Beautiful analysis of Jack and how he must have felt before becoming a Guardian. I especially liked this line:

"Jack has the heart of a child and the sorrows of an old soul, but he is neither so neither will welcome him."

Gosh, that just blew me away.

Cheers,
Jimelda
Star Fata chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
This broke my heart, and I never really saw the symbolism in that moment before now.
greenglassghost chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
this is just . . . wow. Very well done. This is love
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
How nice. The writing style, and ideas and concepts were very interesting in this piece. However, what I think makes it most powerful is that we don't hear Jack's thoughts on the matter at hand at all. You're just stating facts.
My compliments on a lovely little piece of writing.
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