looking forward to the next one

ok, if u dont have one now ill be the beta reader, if a somewhat critical one, pm me the storys, anyway, as i said, longer chapters would be appreciated, but anyway, i like the setup for the guiche battle, and sorry about my caps, but in a quick review i dont bother, anyway, I would like to say that zerpst should probably not hit on the insanely powerful thing people were running away from earlier.

girlycard? do u mean seras? also, i like that louise is smart enough not to order around the giant man who casually talks of killing off her classmates, anyway, i do wonder how guiche will manage to piss alucard off, and again, please lengthen the chapters, also, I hope that you explain girlycard slightly better than the others as she is the only character i know absolutely nothing about, at least as of now

ok, i like his acceptance of a master, after all, he's used to it, but how will hellsing react? and can you please make the chapters longer? also, I wonder if you intend to follow the seiries or take some liberties, after all, if people start out knowing he isnt a commoner, there will have to be alot of changes, and i look foreward to seeing how you do so, i hope you dont dissapoint

i like it alucard is maybe the worst familiar (in the good way) wath loise can summon

Now if this isnt funny then you can call me Sally! I honestly hope that this story isnt dead cause that would just be a shame. Think about the possibilitys! Some more important points of the cannon should be used: Derflinger( Ammo is nearly impossible to come by for Alucard), the fouqet arc( Mostly its convinient to Alucards skill), MAYBE Guiches duell( Dont know if this could be used to show Alucards obedience towards Louise), Reconquista?(Alucard against a whole army? ALL YOU CAN EAT!); the Harem aspect?( Maybe one pairing is easier for you? Though I guess a non-dangerous snacking on someone without turning them should be cool!). Again I hope you will continue this story someday! Ill hear from you in the next update. Sincerly, XcelltasticX

LMAO!

Nice job so far, its about time soneone made one of these

please try to seperate the dialog from the body, example

"speaking"

"dialog"

body

try not to do as you have been:

body "speaking" body body body

otherwise i like the story so far

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it is pretty good

true e told i signaled out this story from boredom and my love of helsing and zero

I like it so far. In my mind, Alucard fits right into a comedy setting, somehow. He'd have a blast trolling everyone. I look forward to the next update.

did you know animals have a sixth sense for dangerous things before earthquakes and tsunamis they all go away so with alucard all animals should be afraid not being able to sleep when he's around at night you can even make louise slowly try to figure out what is happening at the school as she hears stories of a laugh in a empty room or blood disappearing and with the first fight maybe use colbert as he burns alucard to ash than alucard returns in a creepy way and say something really alucard like.
like that was a warming up or something catchier

awsome more more more

Nice chapter