|Reviews for Contract Declined|
| Starman800 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Ok story, didn't say who he killed and how he would have done it. But i liked it but the end since he died waiting.. You should have gone on to say the world feel to Voldie because they waited so long to take up harry on his demands.
| Hyena-Sennin chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Well, that sorta anti-climatic.
| IveGotNoIdea chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
And Voldemort was back two weeks later as the Horcrus in Harry's scar was never destroyed...
| FreaKill chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
While I didn't exactly enjoy it, I'm kind of curious about what actually happened.
Was Harry framed or did he violently snap at some point and constructed the whole "unjust imprisonment" story in his head? Do Ministry and Dumbledore actually have a way to defeat Voldie without their "chosen one" or were they just killed before they had a chance to figure out how to make him work for them?
PS I imagine Fudge and Dumbledore leading the war against Voldemort and can't but think: "Poor British bastards, they are SO screwed."
| Liedral chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Was there a point to this story?
| Slicerness chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Bad End fic. I'm going to begin repressing it from memory. Choke on a dick.
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
i get the will to make it darker and not go to the "let free, killed Voldemort and got betrayed yet again" road so many stories have already used... but somewhat i'm lacking the story here, it's just a fragment of a dialogue, a vignette at best.
I'm sure with a bit of work, more motivation for Harry and his tormentors and more ideas than just "then he died and his body was thrown into the sea" this could become pretty awesome, as it is it's just... there.
| Fibinaci chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
"Eventually he died and his body was thrown into the sea."
Best ending ever I think.
| wy chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
What is wrong with you?
| Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
In "Mercenary's" defense, he read the contract and saw a loophole.
This was rather a downer. But thanks for writing it anyway.
| Ten Toes chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
So... basically, they really DIDN'T need Harry? they defeated Voldy on their own and the prophecy was a bunch of crap? or voldy won and let harry rot? or he died before they came back?
| timunderwood9 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
lol love the ending. Although lol.
| Prongs of PA chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Good start, but a bit more fleshing out would be nice.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Meh, not an entertaining read.
| Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This was really good, given what the Ministry did to discredit or kill Harry its no surprise they would frame him or allow it to happen. I think Albus would have doubts about Harry since he is a Horcrux or he would use Neville as his back up plan.
I really did think Harry would be sent to Azkaban after he killed the Dark Lord in the last book. The Ministry and public were against him and corruption and a need to ignore their mistakes or avoid responsibility for their actions or inactions would ensure Harry was forgotten about, locked up or killed.
The people thinking Harry was dangerous or dark would dog Harry for a very long time and he would be in danger from attack.
Any deal done with the Ministry was sure to be bad for Harry in the short and long term. Harry did the right thing to say no and he can take some comfort that him not killing the Dark Lord would have caused considerable damage and loss of life to magical society which really is not worth saving.
A very funny line "Shacklebolt wasn't any balder"
The Demands Harry could come up with would be interesting, Fudge on a diet or having to wear a clown costume. Dumbledore forced to give Harry the Elder wand and admit he killed his sister and was close to Gellert. A new edition of Hogwarts a History written by Harry.
Thanks for this its not often Harry says no to just about anything. I look forward to what you post next.