So in short, boohoo “I’m so traumatized I’ll just OOC and take it like a bitch”.

And now you've got him hiding shit that's happening to him, your the worst type of pity party writer I've ever seen, joke

Also why is Snape searching for a cure to his own spell? Sectumsempra was a spell created by the half blood Prince I.e snape

I get that harry has been through a lot, but fuck me come on could you have written him to be any more pathetic than you have? Ruined a perfectly good start to story by then making harry a complete bitch, he has never not once shied away from any malfoy, you depress me with your lack of vision

Thanks for sharing the story. I sm sorry you never got to finish this superb story. But feel no guilt.

Everything you did was for free and well thought out. None of us can complain. Ignore any trolls who say otherwise

Thank you

Dynamite

You write GREAT battle scenes

Effective chapter. Short but you covered so much

Nice surprise. But wait until he finds out they squibbes Draco

Alicia’s speech was terrific

Good on you for ripping Snape up. It won’t

Though i believe Dumbles leveled compulsion spells on all of them to build up the fight

Harry’s acting like someone who has gone through basic training. Its hard so you can move on instinct

I am worried about Luna. She will be alone with her crazy father

You handled it beautifully.

Yes, people will die. Though Fudge will be next

Outstanding

Oh man this will be ugly.

But i hope this applies to the DE’s as well