|Reviews for We Stand United|
| Ducky1776 chapter 50 . 5/26
Nonononono! You can't leave me here! You've got to get rid of Moldyshorts for good! I really love this story!
| Ronja chapter 50 . 5/23
I love this story! Please continue!
| VJ Riddle chapter 50 . 5/20
This is a wonderful story! Looking forward to seeing if more people than just Harry can do that Exuro Patronus, and if that spell is one he created on the fly - he might have more requests from the spell-crafting crew! Excited for any updates, and kind of snickered when Ron mentioned looking at the Malfoy family tree for the closest male relative a few chapters ago, because I suddenly had a thought that it'd be hilarious of the Weasleys ended up being that closest relation...
Highly unlikely, true, but hilariously ironic.
| scarlettmeadows chapter 50 . 5/9
I can't believe it's been a year since you last updated!
I know you promised to never abandon a story...but maybe you could drop a line to reassure us that you're not dead? :P
Here's hoping for an update soon!
| scarlettmeadows chapter 47 . 5/9
no one, and I mean no one, kingsley included, would react that sanguinely to his wife being killed. sorry.
but otherwise, story's going really well _ thanks! it's a great read!
| scarlettmeadows chapter 43 . 5/9
I haven't even finished reading this chapter, but I'm going to suggest that stripping draco's magic entirely is not a logical repercussion. he is being charged with ATTEMPTED murder...it's note even a murder charge- and stripping someone's magic is probably akin to, in our society, amputating someone's limbs. I can assure you, with the exception of the most barbaric countries in the world, by this century we have moved on from such drastic and permanent punishments...and even the death sentence is not handed out lightly...and attempted murder is definitely a light charge, comparatively speaking. sorry, but I feel particularly strongly about this issue. I agree with the fact that moving draco into azkaban was a recipe for disaster...as would be allowing him back into hogwarts, and banishment to a muggle prison was a clever idea, but yeah, the magic stripping seems a bit much, especially as he is the heir to an ancient and noble house and, even approaching this logically, at least the older ICW members would have protested such a thing. I don't mean to bash :( so please don't take this personally. I'd love to hear what your rationale was...
| scarlettmeadows chapter 39 . 5/9
also waiting for nott's reaction on being stupefied by harry before the fighting really started...I thought that was a very clever plot point at the time but you haven't really used it for any character development...and still waiting for harry and sirius to have a conversation about the guy he killed...it's one thing for harry to be suppressing his feelings and another for him to not be feeling any guilt at all...
still love the story! _
| scarlettmeadows chapter 38 . 5/9
trying to figure out why harry hasn't had a heart-to-heart with sirius about the kid harry killed with a reducto yet...also why he hasn't had any more flashbacks or panic attacks and where remus disappeared to...
loving the story, though! _
| scarlettmeadows chapter 30 . 5/9
a little proofreading wouldn't go amiss (eg viscuous vs vicious cycle, which I assume is what you meant to write)...I've been noticing more frequent grammatical etc. errors...simple things that could easily be corrected. perhaps a beta reader might help with that.
| scarlettmeadows chapter 28 . 5/9
you could also have juxtaposed harry's behaviour with his comments to sirius at the end of third year when sirius wants to kill wormtail and harry tells him that james and lilly wouldn't want him to become a killer. just another facet of his character to keep in mind. good reading so far! _
| reem.siddique chapter 1 . 5/7
Why are there no more chapters? I started reading it today, and am hungry for more!
| Calmzone1 chapter 50 . 4/21
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your story - as I am finishing to this point at 3:43 am, after having to just read one more chapter to see how things were going. :) I really hope life gives you the opportunity to complete it soon, but I do understand that RL takes precedence always. Thanks for sharing a great story
| KuroLolita1998 chapter 50 . 4/18
| kyoshi711 chapter 15 . 4/8
Why doesn't Harry just change schools? Dumby is useless and Snape should have been punished. The torturers get away with murder and Dumby sits on his ass.
| kyoshi711 chapter 12 . 4/7
Why didn't Harry and the twins give Umbridge a tripping hex on the stairs. Or give her a fart potion. There was so many ways to kill her or imobolize her.