good coda...

Another excellent job! I too, am a fan of the old H50 series, and love the alternate ending/WHN stories. thank you for writing this! I have all the episodes on Netflix, and have watched them a few times, and have thought about many episodes having different endings, missing scenes, WHN, etc. Great job! I have communicated with you through your yahoo site on some of your "Emergency!" works. Keep up the great work!

Nice epilogue to a great episode. The epi showed how strong Steve n Danny's friendship was. Always wished there had been more to the episode n now there is. And a nice one, too. Thanks.

Nicely done! I liked how you conveyed Danny's feelings both in the physical sense and on an emotional level. You displayed a thorough understanding of the characters through your story as seen with their reactions and responses. Loved the episode and this was a great accompaniment that would have made an ideal epilogue had it been filmed.

Really nice little epilogue here. Good description of Danny's physical feelings - the fuzziness, his mind working at a snail's pace, the warm bed, finally feeling safe, etc. And a believable conversation between these two men. You've portrayed their feelings simply with few words, very much in character for these two! A refreshing read. Thanks!

Very nicely detailed snapshot of a great episode, and great writing. Very descriptive - I loved the account of how Danny felt waking up - and a great view in on Steve's reaction. Thank you.