Reviews for The Lost World
Footprints In The Snow chapter 3 . 6/11/2016
Unfortunately, your character is exactly the same as Sarah. Even the first name is similar: Sarah to Kara. You pretty much took lines and actions directly from the movie and changed a few pieces. You need to branch out and truly make it your own. I couldn't read past the third chapter, I was very disappointed.
xsammijoannex chapter 13 . 11/14/2015
I like how you dislike Sarah Something else we have in common
dark-driex-07 chapter 7 . 6/23/2015
They are almost the same... Sorry to disappoint you but you just took sarah's name and face just to paste other name and face but the personality is almost the same... Annoying... I thought that some parts would be different but... I am kinda disappointed with your work...
ijnfleetadmiral chapter 13 . 6/11/2015
Great story, but where was Muldoon? It was advertised with him in it.
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Nice work on this. I have always loved the Jurassic Park movies and I loved your spin on Lost World.
Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit chapter 10 . 6/9/2013
Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit chapter 9 . 6/6/2013
WTF, who would do that
brittany chapter 8 . 5/28/2013
i really like this book:)
wolfs rain lover123 chapter 8 . 5/28/2013
i feally like this story:)
Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit chapter 8 . 5/25/2013
Really loved this chapter, I cant wait for the next one, I need to review the others...just been hectic, I cant wait for more.
tazsgirl6969 chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
great chapter please post more
tazsgirl6969 chapter 6 . 3/7/2013
please post more
GreenBlack1991 chapter 5 . 2/12/2013
cant wait till you update again!
Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit chapter 5 . 2/11/2013
OMG YAY I LOVED IT, lol and im updating mine tomorrow xD
GreenBlack1991 chapter 3 . 1/27/2013
very awesome chap XD like Kara lots more than Sarah XD
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