|Reviews for Missing in Venice|
| Kazegami-inkpot chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Ah, sorry I didn't review right away! But my tests are all done now :)
This was indeed a very interesting concept, the idea that magic creates outcasts in this world. Intriguing. I really liked the characters depth too, they were very real and easy to relate to. Especially Asch's bitter feelings towards Luke. I think I'd feel like that too...though perhaps with a little more control. It was very well done, I can see why you're so proud of it.
Goodjob my friend, I look forward to more from you! And soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
If they're not based off the real characters, why didn't you just make them OCs and put this on fictionpress? -_-; Otherwise, what's the point of taking the characters if all you really used were their names? I'm not really sure why you're proud of this...
| selenia-sopheria chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Wow, for an AU, this really drew me in. It has an intriguing concept, and you really depicted the characters' relationships with each other well. I'm a sucker for family fics, which is probably another reason why I liked this so much. Great job!