|Reviews for Keroro presents: Tamama, my love!|
| BananaMilkshake chapter 5 . 5/30
If the chances are you're still hoping to update this fanfic, I suggest that Giroro and Natsumi kiss first. Just as a different reviewer before mentioned: Giroro and Natsumi hadn't really interacted much... well, apart from that moment where she was lying on the sofa and he came over to cuddle her which was quite sweet.
Nicely done, any way. -
| The Minecraft 1 chapter 5 . 7/11/2014
I think it should happen on chapter 7.
| crazykittycat chapter 5 . 2/24/2013
natsumi and giroro!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Giroro and Natsumi should kiss first, since there is so little of them. To catch them up? I liked it, even though its hard seeing Keroro blush over Tamama, and him not noticing. I don't get why momaka went out on a date with another guy, actually, I don't get anything her or fuyuki does in the story.
| TamamaNitoheiDesu chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
Keroro and Tamama
| LCplDororo chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
| RunwithscissorsXXXbattlescars chapter 5 . 1/12/2013
Aww he licked it off! How cute.
Um... let's have Tamama and Keroro kiss first!
| Mr.penguin991 chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
giroro should win the bet i would die of laughter if natsumi didn't expect it but overall i think that YOU control the story
| anon chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
please continue this story... i love it. 3
| Raven Hinayuki chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
ok love the reference best ep is 18 and i love kerotama so cute love ur work so good
| RunwithscissorsXXXbattlescars chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
Hehe. But his life kind of DOES revolve around Natsumi!
Ohhh the Pokemon. My sister's playing it right now. Like. Right next to me.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
i proudly suggest a kerotama wedding. more people will give you compliments if you make it super awesome and romantic! try new things.
| Otaku chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Okie dokie, where do I start?
(I'm British, by the way, so don't be surprised if I use some British phrases to describe something and you get confused! That's my story, I'm sticking with it. I swear I'm not an alien here to inva- uh... Moving swiftly on...)
1) Rapeseed is real; it's not a typo! It comes from a yellow flower, which is, in fact, called rapeflower. It's rather amusing, even if I do say so myself
2) Please add more GiroNatsu! As much as I do like KeroTama, I think that, to appeal to wider reading audiences, you should expand your shipping factor.
3) You should stick to writing in 3rd person; your 1st person tryout in chapter 3 was a little confusing, to say the least...
4) Oh my! You mentioned 17/12/12! That's today's date! What a coincidence!
5) Try to do more thorough final chapter readthroughs: you had a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, with a skattering of punctuational errors...
6) As much as I'm sure you enjoy relating to your readers, talking about your social life in your 'AN' section is a little innapropriate (and slightly irritating) for those who just want to read a Keroro Gunso fanfiction...
7) Please post more chapters! This story has good promise, and many exploitable factors! Work hard enough, and you could get many rewards for your literacy!
8) Get well soon!
9) I'm sorry about the flame-review, but I believe that constructive criticism is always more positive than negative, don't you?
Cheerio, and good luck with the story!./
| RunwithscissorsXXXbattlescars chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
I sense misletoe a-comin'...
Because of Keroro's pottymouth, I think you might want to change the rating to M.
Wait-Why was Momoka going to go on a date with someone that wasn't Fuyuki? O.O I'm confused...
| sagapaga chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
oh oh oh I have a suggestion for a one-shot!
Keroro is running a around like an idiot, screaming 'I knew it!'
Then Giroro gets pissed off and roars 'WHAT!'
Then Keroro makes a cool pose and says 'I'm awesome'