Reviews for Twilight 25 - Round 7
TrulyOutrageous chapter 20 . 1/22/2013
love it
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 22 . 1/22/2013
HOT DAMN! well that's spicy. i like that. 100 words and you got us there. i think the height of it was the height of it. "I lift her hips right off the bed and push in again, hard.

Bella convulses below me.

There it is." yes yes yes yes. good show, old chap.
DawnsWhimsy chapter 21 . 1/22/2013
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 21 . 1/22/2013
ha! i liked this one tied with the prompt. damn that skin. you try to do good things but the skin is the devil.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 20 . 1/22/2013
ooooooooooooooo. curiouser and curiouser.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 19 . 1/22/2013
loved the description of the surroundings and his seeing Bella in their little girl.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 18 . 1/22/2013
i love pre-Bellaward. i need to ask you about some good fics you've read during this time. i also miss your vampfic. what are they up to? i think about them.
DawnsWhimsy chapter 19 . 1/22/2013
Aww reminds me of childhood!
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 17 . 1/21/2013
excellent metaphor is excellent
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 16 . 1/21/2013
so sad...this is so good...makes me wonder what happens in your world of this canon or if it carries on the way Meyer implies.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
nice! dipping into those early POV moments with Renesmee.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 14 . 1/21/2013
haha! clever girl, clever girl. this was awesome because of the innuendo but then the reveal - something that is ALWAYS just as sexy if not more so - the putting on of a man's tie.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 13 . 1/21/2013
oh man...i love these short bursts of words. they pack punches.
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
lol this sounds like he the muse here? i wish we knew if Rob sweats as much as Bobby when he performs. maybe we'll know one day...
tinkrbe1l3 chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
Garrett and Kate!
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