Reviews for I'll Show You Who's In Charge
paintmaci chapter 3 . 2/15
Ooola la! Somebody call the fire department becasue that was HOT! HOT! HOTTT! For being the first one to ever write it was certainly quite entertaining and interesting to read. It held the precise amount of steaminess and eroticness (yes it's a word, look it up) that made everything seem real. Though it contained the necessary ingredients to make this of the most absolutely erotic and kinky fanfiction, the storyboard wasn't quite comprehensive, I couldn't quite understand what the conflict was towards the end. Then again, it's okay since it is your first story. It was definitely breathtaking and the songs in my playlist that I was listening to at the same time just made the mood and emotion come life. GOOD JOB ON WRITING THIS STORY! I certainly look forward reading more of you, hopefully soon.
UruD chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
This is ridiculously hot. If you write another Fic, I'm gonna read it without doubts. Totally love the fluffy and playful end.
me chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
I quite enjoyed this story glad I stuck it out, not many people do a proper jealous Brittany and that was great needless to say, glad it was just roleplay well done, you should write more this was great stuff, be interesting to see what else you come up with besides a three-shot
M206 chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Ok, PHEW, I'm glad Santana didn't really cheat. I was so worried that it prevented me from really enjoying the story!

Delicious story though!:)
M206 chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
Was santana just trying to rile Brittany up or did she really have sex with Angela?
M206 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
HOT...though I wish Santana would more forcefully deny she was cheating. The idea of Santana being with anyone but Brittany makes me feel sick:(
Miss Meh chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Great smut. Well written and quite entertaining :)
lele34110 chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
i like xD santana in the end is so fin xD
Rainezeik chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
It's nice. Hahaha aside from th thingy, but all in all, it was hot and nice ;)
famehooker chapter 3 . 12/7/2012
Well shit. This is just about the hottest thing I've ever read in my life. Can't believe this is your first fic. Very well done. Very. Well. Done.
Angelinside77 chapter 3 . 12/7/2012
Nice finish! Thanks for the story. Hope there's more where that came from :)
cml2187 chapter 2 . 12/7/2012
I love it! So hot I think I need a cold shower. Totally hanging for the next chap!
definitelyalopez chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Please tell me Santana didn't really cheat :(
Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Please updateee
Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
Great chapter, please update the third, and tell me Santana didn't cheat :/ please
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