Reviews for The Elemental Saviour
HealingRose2 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Seriously? Hermione not remembering a potion? That's sounds like the most ubserd thing I ever read in my life
Guest chapter 26 . 2/24/2015
rai chapter 26 . 10/12/2013
i got so confused...
loving-reader-and-writer chapter 26 . 8/12/2013
Wow this story was fast jumpy and many other things. I enjoyed the concepts and plot points but I think that this could have been a great story if you took the time to drag it more. I see it as a three part story. With her learning about being an elemental, her growing relationship with snaps and ginnys changes happening alongside side hermiones being the first part. Hermione going into her mind, and her figuring out her own mind being the second. Oh and I think her appearance changes needed more explaining. And the third part being the world changes.

I really liked the content of your story that's why I kept reading I just think that you could have stretched it out and done more with it.
bluefirefly5 chapter 26 . 7/30/2013
That was weird. But original.
bluefirefly5 chapter 25 . 7/30/2013
Now the Founders...
bluefirefly5 chapter 24 . 7/30/2013
So that's Severus' fault then?
bluefirefly5 chapter 23 . 7/30/2013
That's even more warped. How many realities are playing here?
bluefirefly5 chapter 22 . 7/30/2013
Well, I'm glad Leviathan Hermione's sense of self-preservation is so strong.
bluefirefly5 chapter 21 . 7/30/2013
That's harder to follow each chapter.
bluefirefly5 chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
That alternate reality is sick.
bluefirefly5 chapter 19 . 7/30/2013
bluefirefly5 chapter 18 . 7/30/2013
I hope she'll be able to touch Severus.
bluefirefly5 chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
I hope the elemental magic will save her.
bluefirefly5 chapter 16 . 7/30/2013
I do hope it was the good box.
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