Nooooooo. There has to be more to read.
Loved this chapter as always. Great emotion. Loved the detailed descriptions. And I liked the how you handled the conversation between Jack and Rosé.

Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.

Perfection! And omg Jack is amazing, I loved the end of the chapter. Can't wait until the next chapter! :)

This story is so dark... I LOVE IT! You explain the character's emotions perfectly! The very end was hilarious though because I feel that was something Jack and Jackie really would have said to one another. "It's fine Mrs. Tyler." "It's Ms., actually." "Mum. Not the right time." Haha. I really laughed out loud at this! Thanks for writing this story for us. I can't wait for the update! :)

Don't you DARE say that this story turned out "not looking like much"! It is brilliant! Thank-you for updating. I just hope that the Doctor and Rose find a way to show their love for one another again. They have a long, wibbly-wobbly road ahead of them, don't they?

Well done.

Thank you for updating - a very welcome holiday present and one well worth waiting for!

Hey there!
I think I started to read this fic when there were only a few chapters, and I loved it, but I didn't review back then, so sorry for that!
I love this one.
Can I just say..I simply love your writing style. It's just perfect, you know.
You make me smile and then you make my heart race and you give me goosebumps and that certain feeling one sometimes gets when reading whump.
Tenrose will always be my OTP, although I enjoy Ten!Whump far more than I should, and more than fluff...
I loved how you brought Adam Mitchell back. Not the Master, any old villain or an OC, no, someone whom we know and who actually isn't that evil. Or rather hasn't been when we met him the last time.
Loved the whump!
Loved everything.
It was heart-wrenching. (still is.)
I have way too much fantasy to read those stories, I really should stop...
after I read, well, maybe just one more?
Keep it on!
Love
Blackbird

Oh. My. God. You updated! Thank god! I missed this story SO much! It definitely made my night... No matter how sad it was. I really hope you update soon. I really missed this story!

Simply excellent. You may want to consider not having such huge chunks of just explanations though...slows down the pace of the story considerably xx

Just wanted to say I love this story as well and hope you update soon! :)

Adam!? What!? No!? But...Adam!

You've captured the characters so well in this. I love it...I really really love it

This story is amazing. I absolutely love it! I hope you can update soon.

Wow. This story really took my breath away, multiple times. I'm usually wary of whump, just because a lot of times people insert it in place of emotion, and it leads to a really flat story, unless you're super great at imagining torture. But you handled all of this so well! It's so dark, but so well handled, that it doesn't come across as crass. The fear and helplessness was tangible... I was supposed to be studying for finals, but instead of sitting in the library (where I actually was), I was down in that basement with Rose and the Doctor! Haha so thanks for a needed distraction from the stress! I can't wait to know how the Doctor improves, 'cause gosh darn it I know he will!

Oh my God, i love the way you think! I'm not sure if i should be this excited for such a story, but oh well it's great! Keep it up, you evil mastermind. :D