Reviews for The Unicorn at Hogwarts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() sad it ends here, this was rather good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re: Author's Note, I don't consider it much of a risk. Rather I think it opens you up for many more options. It also introduces the Animagious transformation to twilight in an interesting way. It is possible she and Spike could both become Humangious' And perhaps teach their friends an Equestrian transformative magic of some sort. Harry as a Dragon or Pegasus would be interesting. I would love to see this continued, though I would also like to see Hermione as part of the co-ed Beauxbatons contingent. (No unisex schools please?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue this is genius |
![]() ![]() WHERE THE HECK IS HERMIONE GRANGER!? |
![]() ![]() Where's Hermione?! |
![]() ![]() 2014 ... and it was going soo good too ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you return to this someday. I quite liked 'Harry is a Dragon', and this story was going very nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how this story panned out, I hope you'll pick it up again now that your other HP story is done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this chapter. Why? Because I am a Scientist, specifically a Biologist. I about choked when you managed to use 'digitigrade' and 'plantigrade' correctly! Your Genetics are correct, too, including the detail that a simple chi-square does not explain everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd really like to see more of this one, always up for a well-written MLP/HP crossover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite interesting. Is MLP worth a look? Is the lore interesting enough to get one past the cheesy dialog and songs? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story abandoned? If not, are you ever going to update it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story going to be continued? I think it's really good, please finish it, at least until the end of the first year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly Pettigrew showing up on the Marauders Map for years and the twins *not* investigating it was the biggest plot hole of the whole story of the map. Good on you for actually addressing it. You also made it quite believable in that they didnt believe it right away so they took time to verify it, thus why it's only happening now. Also good show on Harry for that stunner. A little preview won his future as a great duelist in the books. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had characters talk of pure blood and family status. Twilight, at the time you've set, is as close to a noble as you can get without being one. Her family is wealthy, her brother is captain of the royal guard, and is soon to marry a princess which would make him the prince consort. Given that he is becoming second in line for the throne of the crystal empire it would make all of their family minor nobility. I'm not sure what but certainly some form of noble. I want to say Twilight would be a Dutchess but I might be making that up. Still, it's a good trump card to throw around in a social situation. |