Reviews for The Unicorn at Hogwarts |
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dialNforNinja chapter 8 . 6/28/2014 The difference it makes, having an adult as "one of the gang." Even if Twi does tend to be a bit impulsive from time to time. |
SonicAnime2010 chapter 8 . 6/4/2014 amazing how many ideas fanfictions like these can come up with to solve canon issues with for example, Harry Potter's living situation... Oh here's one more.. in an anime (series, guess!) there's this city in Japan called "Academy City" home to 2.3 million people with 80% of them students; with technology estimated at being 30 years ahead of the "modern era" or for Wizarding Britain, about half a century (Wizards! GET CELL PHONES!).. Heck no one cares if anyone's a "freak" with magic there.. actually one would be an "esper" there.. I'd estimate, in conjunction to a fair comparison to who's on what level.. Harry'd be a solid level 2-3.. out of 5 and that's considering the fact that Level 5s are quite rare.. There are only 7 of them and aside from the 3rd ranked, most of them are insane or somewhat sociopathic (I've read a few have calmed down on that matter); although the magic bit may actually cause some trouble.. warring sides, science and magic.. who knows?! Anyways, I like how the Invisibility Cloak was interpreted here, especially with how it can't even be detected somewhat by Twilight's magic; and she also brought up a huge point about the Mirror of Erised, I realized recently about Erised being spelt desire backwards; pretty nifty on the author's part there. Anyways nice solid update |
Bobboky chapter 8 . 6/3/2014 Very good work |
Final Genesis chapter 8 . 6/2/2014 What a fun way to spend Christmas at Hogwarts with Twilight in the picture! Snowball fights, chess, presents, exploration, what more do you want? Good to hear from you again, and I wonder what more Christmas stuff is planned next chapter? :) This is Final Genesis, signing out! |
romaji chapter 8 . 6/1/2014 This looks interesting as a change point |
Sg91 chapter 8 . 6/1/2014 You've earned a trophy! From the depths of the heart! XD hey, it's good to see you again... and, as always, a great reading with a perfect synchronization between the two worlds. I was expecting Dumbledore, but at the end he didn't show up. A detail, and very well executed. I'll get to work with this new chapter when I finish with the new one of my story, Mother's Love. Great, keep it up. |
Ryuus2 chapter 8 . 6/1/2014 This was surprisingly fun to read. I've only started watching MLP recently, and I'm still boggling at how much I'm enjoying it. And this story has now opened me to the idea of MLP fanfiction. I can feel myself sinking further and further into their world...it's only a matter of time before the bronyhood overtakes me at this point...I must...resist... Existential crisis aside, this is a very well constructed story. You'd think it would be impossible to fuse these two worlds like this, but the way everything worked out was very in character for everyone involved. Hagrid rolls with it, Dumbledore plays with it, Twilight reads about it, and everyone else just follows Dumbledore's lead like the sheep they are-with a few exceptions that either don't know enough to care, or just don't care in general. Everything else is the butterfly effect. It's really refreshing to see all of the idiocy in the first book handled by someone capable of logic and proficient in its use that does so with tact instead of wit or sarcasm. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around how no one has ever pointed out that there's nothing stopping the boys from viewing the Mirror of Erised in the daytime. Spelling, grammar, pacing, characters, plot twists, continuity...everything is great and flows together excellently. Keep up the great work! |
Stainless Steel Fox chapter 8 . 6/1/2014 So, no Bumblemore with his trite little homilies, instead we have Twilight who takes a practical approach. The old bumblebee must have had some way of telling that people had been looking in the mirror. I take a great deal of pleasure imagining that the old buzzard will be sitting around all night in a drafty classroom waiting to pull the wise old mentor bullcrap he affects, and get nothing for it but piles. Great chapter, looking forward as always to more. |
MuggleCreator chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 Nice stuff. |
Darksnider05 chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 Wonder if Twilight could do the reverse of an Animagus transformation and change into something bipedal with hands. Doesn't even have to be human just humanoid in shape. Would be interesting and magical people use to do human transfiguration as fashion. |
VONDON WILES chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 TO AUTHOR SAPHRONETH I THINK THAT MY LITTLE PONY AND HARRY POTTER CROSSOVER FANFICTION STORY THAT YOU WROTE THE UNICORN AT HOGWARTS CHAPTER 8 NO TIME LIKE PRESENTS WAS GREAT |
Jedi Alex Colbent chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 Nice update. |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 It is not a SEMester if there are three of them, it is a trimester. Twilight is the sort of person who would know this. |
Love Elemental chapter 7 . 5/12/2014 This is the sort of story where an update is bittersweet, since it encompasses both /more story/ and a /finite/ amount of story. I am truly glad to have read it, since the mix of Twilight Sparkle and Spike with the cast of Harry Potter is very well measured. I'm curious about the line where Harry says he's gotten permission to stay at Hogwarts. I hadn't expected it. I can guess at where that permission arose, but I'm hoping to see it touched upon in text, as well. |
Emeraldpichu chapter 1 . 5/7/2014 For how iffy it started, the story turned out pretty well and I find myself intrigued |