Reviews for Broken
B chapter 2 . 7/8
Loved your use of Sam Hain and the bit of history/backstory.
MumblePhantomFox chapter 6 . 9/16/2016
I'm a total sucker for this fandom's lore, and this is just lovely. :D Great job, solid ten out of ten, I loved it!
Lmb111514 chapter 6 . 8/13/2016
Aww, I'm glad you never will have to again... this story was amazing, I enjoyed every chapter and I hope to read more soon!
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 5/20/2016
I like who the rescuers were, great idea to show their acceptance of Jack as a guardian.

Wonderful ending and I loved his sarcastic thought about how everyone thinks his power comes from the staff lol
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Nice choice of the other spirits, very creative! I like how Jack slowly was able to overcome his doubts and listen to his heart. Very good character growth
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 5/20/2016
So glad you included the movie scene too, nicely done
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 5/20/2016
I like the origin of his sweat shirt, it nice how Phil took care of him. Good job showing the effects of Jack's isolation on his interactions with others.
Back in the previous chapter with the emotions and control, makes me wish for ROTG and Frozen cross over where Jack could help Elsa learn control.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 5/20/2016
Cool twist with Sam Hain, I did wonder about how many other spirits there were out there.
I like how Jack and the Sandman have bonded before it, it fits so well.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
I love his connection with the wind, so touching, his first friend. Nice way to point out his power comes from him and not the staff
Commander Chandell 919 chapter 6 . 3/26/2016
Love this! That is all that I can say.
I love this!
Night Ryder711 chapter 6 . 12/9/2015
I don't care if they saved Jack and the Big Four. I still don't like them.

Good chapter :)
coolexaj chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Ikr ROTG is 100000000000000000x better then Frozen,it teaches about our child-hood and now the stupid dumb idoitic theme that love prevails all.I'd go more in depth but nah too much work.I DONT KNOW WHY IT FAILED AT BOX OFFICE WTF
Zephyr169 chapter 6 . 7/1/2015
aww 3 I loved it! :D
Zyenna chapter 6 . 5/24/2015
This is so sweet! I love it!
LDK chapter 6 . 5/18/2015
Really great story, I enjoyed reading it through and through. Love how you portraid all the guardians, and it's certainly interesting to read from this point of view. Thanks for writing this!
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