Reviews for Broken
wolfwind42 chapter 5 . 10/3/2022
Jack would never take this shit lying down. He'd fight back, insult them, do whatever. He's not gonna just sit down and cry because someone called him stupid.
wolfwind42 chapter 3 . 10/3/2022
His staff isn't this fragile. Even a regular staff doesn't break this often.
Ms. Dragon Reader chapter 5 . 4/12/2021
I find it funny that summer heat was there because all the season have killed or destroy something while Spring just gives people hay fever. Nice chapter though.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/6/2019
Nice story. Thanks for writting this
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
I'm not sure what the next chapter looks like, but I definetly wouldn't mind a companion chapter to this. Please?
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
Okay, my bad. It was 20 and not 10. I was the person who'd bother commenting on a story that's probably done and over with but still. To anybody that just chances to see this, have a great day
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
Not even a good 5 paragraphs in and already? I mean, I Love This and all, but Wow. I wish I could be as great of an author as you
Guest chapter 4 . 7/6/2019
Honestly I hadn't noticed the change in tenses myself. Unless u eventually did go back and fix it. Why do I find good stuff after the fact it's been years? Sure, late than never, but for once would it kill me to be on time or early?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2019
Yes, yes you should continue my fine author
Demi clayton chapter 6 . 5/12/2019
I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.
Zela Night chapter 6 . 1/11/2019
This is amazing and touching. I adore this headcannon!
Grammar nerd chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
*lose not loose
Lose is what happens to things in your pocket w/ a hole.
Loose is someone's pants without a belt.
everdragon chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
This is lovely
B chapter 2 . 7/8/2017
Loved your use of Sam Hain and the bit of history/backstory.
MumblePhantomFox chapter 6 . 9/16/2016
I'm a total sucker for this fandom's lore, and this is just lovely. :D Great job, solid ten out of ten, I loved it!
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