Reviews for Broken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Jack would never take this shit lying down. He'd fight back, insult them, do whatever. He's not gonna just sit down and cry because someone called him stupid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His staff isn't this fragile. Even a regular staff doesn't break this often. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it funny that summer heat was there because all the season have killed or destroy something while Spring just gives people hay fever. Nice chapter though. |
![]() ![]() Nice story. Thanks for writting this |
![]() ![]() I'm not sure what the next chapter looks like, but I definetly wouldn't mind a companion chapter to this. Please? |
![]() ![]() Okay, my bad. It was 20 and not 10. I was the person who'd bother commenting on a story that's probably done and over with but still. To anybody that just chances to see this, have a great day |
![]() ![]() Not even a good 5 paragraphs in and already? I mean, I Love This and all, but Wow. I wish I could be as great of an author as you |
![]() ![]() Honestly I hadn't noticed the change in tenses myself. Unless u eventually did go back and fix it. Why do I find good stuff after the fact it's been years? Sure, late than never, but for once would it kill me to be on time or early? |
![]() ![]() Yes, yes you should continue my fine author |
![]() ![]() I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing and touching. I adore this headcannon! |
![]() ![]() *lose not loose Lose is what happens to things in your pocket w/ a hole. Loose is someone's pants without a belt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is lovely |
![]() ![]() Loved your use of Sam Hain and the bit of history/backstory. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a total sucker for this fandom's lore, and this is just lovely. :D Great job, solid ten out of ten, I loved it! |