I find it funny that summer heat was there because all the season have killed or destroy something while Spring just gives people hay fever. Nice chapter though.

Nice story. Thanks for writting this

I'm not sure what the next chapter looks like, but I definetly wouldn't mind a companion chapter to this. Please?

Okay, my bad. It was 20 and not 10. I was the person who'd bother commenting on a story that's probably done and over with but still. To anybody that just chances to see this, have a great day

Not even a good 5 paragraphs in and already? I mean, I Love This and all, but Wow. I wish I could be as great of an author as you

Honestly I hadn't noticed the change in tenses myself. Unless u eventually did go back and fix it. Why do I find good stuff after the fact it's been years? Sure, late than never, but for once would it kill me to be on time or early?

Yes, yes you should continue my fine author

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

This is amazing and touching. I adore this headcannon!

*lose not loose
Lose is what happens to things in your pocket w/ a hole.
Loose is someone's pants without a belt.

This is lovely

Loved your use of Sam Hain and the bit of history/backstory.

I'm a total sucker for this fandom's lore, and this is just lovely. :D Great job, solid ten out of ten, I loved it!

Aww, I'm glad you never will have to again... this story was amazing, I enjoyed every chapter and I hope to read more soon!

I like who the rescuers were, great idea to show their acceptance of Jack as a guardian.

Wonderful ending and I loved his sarcastic thought about how everyone thinks his power comes from the staff lol