|Reviews for My Word is Law|
| shadowlover30 chapter 8 . 1/25
I really liked the story it was cute and different from the other stories I've read so far I hope to read more stories from u when u get around to writing them anyway have a good weekend. Ja ne : )
| dragon0905 chapter 8 . 1/20
(Thinks of kicking the next person who tries puppy dog eyes on him) nice story. Needs more. (Starts bashing his writers block)
| dragon0905 chapter 6 . 1/20
Sorry just read ch 6. "Why mister...I've been good"?! Whats up with that? I'm usually pretty good at interpreting the meaning even when its written incoherently. But you got me on that part...
So far nice story and even a nice idea on how to actually change the origonal story but keep the base concepts without being a total ripoff of the original.
| QChronoD chapter 8 . 1/18
It was a good story, especially for a first attempt. Your english was really good with just a few minor errors (mostly just wrong words likely due to them being spelled/pronounced oddly) Certainly a lot better than lots of people on this site who only speak english. Looking forward to reading your other stories in the next few days.
| MagykjayEmmax chapter 8 . 12/17/2013
This was a nice story to read and simple to follow. I like the original plot. :]
| Xaax chapter 8 . 11/6/2013
Hey, just wanted to leave a job well done! Just got done reading this and was amazed by this piece of work. Keep up this kind of writing. I'll fav you and this story once I log in tomorrow.
| shirogane soul chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
| Leonas chapter 8 . 11/5/2013
This wasn't all that bad of a story. I liked how you worded and worked. You had some really good twists going there. My favorite part though is that this is actually HINATA'S harem and not naruto's. That makes me bvery happy. Also love hinata's blood thirsty streak adn new catchphrase. looking forward to checking out more of your work.
| rperodin chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
Very good story. I liked it very much.
| llazo4108822 chapter 8 . 9/27/2013
I love this fanfic.
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
Bwahahahahahahahahahaaha. Kakashi's porn sense was tingling. Oh man that was funny to read. I loved reading that man.
| Wondering Knight chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
This was a great story with a lot of promise. Only things I'd edit would be Hinata's attitude and god like power she has and draw the story out with more details. It feels a little rushed and there is a large gap between Hinata and Naruto meeting and them having kids. A lot of things could be written. Still good regardless.
| Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 8 . 8/11/2013
personally i say go with a sequel. with how you ended the fic, you could go in so many directions. my mind is saying crossover. there are other continents in that world right, so whose to say that the story of another series isn't taking place. your story was left resolved yet open ended, the possible directions, crossover or otherwise, are endless. but the decision is yours as i am mearly the reader. i hope you'll at least consider my idea though.
| Leaf Ranger chapter 8 . 8/9/2013
Wow. This was one heck of a fanfic. Most impressive. Never seen an empress of the West before. *nods*
Keep up the awesome work!
| Guywithafish chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Great story, you definitely need more facts. Do you think it will be possible to write about hinata and fuu fusion the west? That's what always annoyed me about stories about the west.