Reviews for End of time
Avalon West chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
Your writing is so expressive! I feel tired and depressed just reading it! Watching movies is great, but you can only put certain things into words. You're doing a great job at that! I don't know how long it should be-I guess it depends on what your vision for it is. You could end it with her death. Or you could explain what happened. Or you could have both Arthur and Ariadne (mostly her) experiancing flashbacks of their relationship. I like putting a lot of possibilities out for authors. When it comes down to it, it's completly your decision. Best of luck as you decide what to do next! :)
Avalon West chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
There has to be more! There just has to be! Please write another chapter-maybe it's a flashback to what happened before or maybe after. Give us something else to read pretty pretty pretty please with a cherry on top!
grazia591 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Next chapter? Yes!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
such a beautiful moving stoy. I love it!
origamifoxes chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I loved this so much, please don't let Ari die D:
Can't wait till the next update!
cinematherapy chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I liked it!