|Reviews for Leading Astray|
| Arctic blue rose chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
Please please pleasie you have to update the story. :)
| Matsuri Yuki chapter 6 . 8/31/2013
Okay! Let's pretend I did not get caught up with a bunch of stuff and didn't review on time like I was suppose to so on with my review of chapters 4, 5 and 6.
For chapter 4... I honestly admire how you are able to write action; like fight scenes while this story is still yaoi, and made Hidan fought really accurately! With the brutal slaughtering of the attackers plus the toying with his 'prey'... I could very well imagine it happen, really. And with Itachi's thoughts running through the whole time, the whole description, how very exciting and original : O.
I really liked the action scene and the dramatic relief of them walking in the mud linked so nicely together. From brutally killing to Itachi squeaking from Hidan grabbing his butt... hahaha awww.
I don't know about you, but chapter 5 is extremely funny for me. Like where Hidan caught the fishes and killed them while naked... and Itachi calling him a "savage" because of it really made me laugh and imagine it in my head. Since Itachi wasn't raised to run around naked while killing fishes it really must have been rather awkward. (haha).
And sexy description of Hidan's body... I don't blame Itachi for checking him out ; ). It's really fascinating how Hidan can transform from a killer to a child then to a sexy beast. Oh my hahaha Itachi hates the idea of being called a couple... not for long though "grins". Ohhh, everything is getting so exciting... Now they have to share beds I just love how Itachi is so unwilling.
Chapter 6 was really hot... I think Hidan whats Itachi to like him, and tried to coo him to confess(?) when he wrapped his arms around Itachi's waist. "He was angry with himself and with the damn zealot too because he was too blunt and too... just everything too. (haha) Yes, Hidan was everything "too". Itachi's wet dream definitely proves he likes Hidan.
"Shopping with Hidan was a disaster. A loud, obnoxious, teasing disaster!" Yes, I agree completely XD. But the outcome was hot :P... I think I am too obbessed with cat Itachi... And Hidan as a wolf does suit his personality well too.
And the last part where they were kissing... God it was really hot I think I am going to have a nosebleed soon if I keep reading your work, but it's okay because your work is worth it. Aww, Itachi was disappointed when Hidan stopped... I am as well (hahahahaha) now they are going upstairs... to ****. Okay I am kidding but I will tentatively wait for it to happen ;). Knowing you will most definitely deliver a good sex scene.
In conclusion, I don't read too many long chapter stories, but this (yours) is very much worth it and it catches my attention. It's really nice how you can maintain the story and plot unlike me XD. Please do keep writing, I enjoyed it so much it's really one of a kind.
I give my best regards and I hope you have a nice day/night. Take care
| Matsuri Yuki chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
I know this is somewhat delayed (I am sorry I have been rather occupied with events and such), but before I give my review on this story I want to say that I will split my review in 2 parts, one being chapter 1-3 and the other 4,6; so then it will not be as annoying as 6 all at once or just a huge long article (haha).
So, on with my commentaries!
What an interesting start to this all, very attention catching especially the first few lines and how it is directed towards Itachi and his thoughts on the events that are happening. I especailly liked how Hidan was introduced, and Itachi's accurate reaction of analyzing Hidan's appearance and behaviour. It was rather amusing how Itachi almost instantly disliked Hidan, but as we all know the sheer irony of him falling for the man was, and is envitable in the end. ;).
What's funnier was that "Hidan never shut upped" (haha) Sounds totally like him, talking and swearing and making fun of poor Itachi XD. He is truly the only person who can piss off Itachi so quickly. I really do feel for Itachi... Kisame will be dearly missed, because "Kisame had never been so annoying." Hahaha.
And lastly, very nice ending it most certainly makes me want to read more.
Right, on to the next chapter.
I can imagine Itachi's annoyance for Hidan very well, though I can't help but laugh at his suffering and how Hidan's behaving like a child. Maybe "pretty eyes" here is a bit too uptight towards the man... But we all know what is going to happen in the end wink wink :P.
Again, the characters and situation of this scene are very well portrayed. Even though Itachi's is still harping on the idea of Hidan as being an annoying child he cannot help but be interested in the man; maybe he is already developing some feelings for him (?).
Haha their conversation is so entertaining to read, the way Hidan always makes those sassy remarks and putting Itachi on edge constantly... I love it so much. And how Hidan suddenly woke up when Itachi called his name, it's kind of cute in a twisted way no?
No wonder Kakuzu feels annoyed around Hidan so much, and now Itachi probably agrees with him by now. Especially the swamp scene, where both of them were drenched; with Hidan complaining and swearing... Annoying, but so cute.
How Hidan thanked Itachi by licking his cheek was "interesting" ;) there will probably be much more than cheek licking later on... (haha).
I really enjoyed these few chapters, and I look forward to reading more of it. :)
Keep up the good work!
| darkest lilly chapter 6 . 8/11/2013
Yo update soon I rlly like this story pretty plz!
| blackdominatrix chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
More...:):):) enjoyed the new chapter but its's too short!
| itanejiluver chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
Ahaha! I think that Itachi became a little bit shyer and more confused in this chapter, but i still liked it. Nice work!
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
Please continue! I was really hoping for an update of yours! I'm just so tired of seeing too many OC/Hidan stories around here...
| loverofakatsuki chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
I practically died reading this it was SO funny!
Wished Hidan did more to Itachi in bed but good things come later ;p
The costume shopping just struck me really hilarious, especially his reaction when he found the cat costume XD
Great chapter as always and LOVED the hot kissing scene, Hidan knows how to do everything...I wished he didn't stop too Itachi :3
| Alexei liqueur chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
why did no one told poor Itachi that is a girls costume?!
Maybe because every one saw him had a sudden heart attack, but i'm not sure, let me check (look at him) ... yes ... my hand is numb
| OokamiHime567 chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
Awesome! I love the idea about the animal costume. Pure gold!
| blackdominatrix chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
I love it,please update soon :):):):)
| Madara-Sensei chapter 5 . 5/23/2013
Cant wait for the next chapter x3
| loverofakatsuki chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Damn straight, Itachi looks nothing like a girl. He a sexy man! ;)
Awesome funny chapter, love Hidan's way of doing things as always and his confusing Itachi now XD
| Uchihacest Seduction Ninja chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Oh pleaseee continue this! I love the pairing!
| LadyShadow22 chapter 5 . 5/8/2013
Sympa , il est d'un gout Hidan des fois