|Reviews for He Who Tastes the Forbidden Blossom|
| phAnt0mgh0st7018 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
Spunky! Update Please! :))
| kyuumihaira chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
Oh no! Byakuya!
| Walkure Leuad chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
He. And if byakuya is the one down now you'll know you where never in love before really.,.
| Byakuya-fan chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
Very nice! When Byakuya goes after Madoka, I think it be cool to see him in his usually cold and brutally ruthless stance. Brilliantly merciless.
| Nyma chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
Eek Bya! :(
| Mrs. Passionate chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
So glad to see an update for this story! :) I hope they can work things out soon.
| nyu chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
I like the way Renji struggles to make things work it's funny to see them dealing with the troubles of "early love", so cute ! These kind of stories are really rare, so I'm really enjoying this one
| ElZhitsi chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
Hey, I just stumbled on this story, and I thought it was really awesome, are you planning on updating it again or is it on hyatus?
| Caitriona695 chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Renji and Bya are SOOO not understanding one another at this point. It makes me a little angry at Renji. He can't even remember to call him by his name! grrr.
| StephanieRie chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
Dear Starfire, I'm totally in love with this new story. I've just finish to read it, and I think it's wonderful! I found your writing style improved day by day, I've read all your stories and always I've noticed a real improvement. I think this story is the result of your maturity. When, on top of chapter two, you said "I just want to say again, if you do not enjoy the way I am writing Byakuya and Renji this time, please stop reading and don't bash the story. I am really working to become a better writer. And part of that is going out on a limb and doing things differently."...well, I'm totally agree with you. This story explores new roads, new possibilities, and certaintly the desire of a new type of challenge! I seriously think that this story should be continued to be writing, with the same enthusiasm and determination! It's so full of eroticism, passion, love and at the same time reality. The image of Renji is marvelous: his masculinity, mixed with the right amount of rude sensuality makes him even more attractive. It makes me realize the infinite possibilities we can create with the characters we love. In this case the background for the birth of this love is as realistic as possible. I am impressed by the striking image of Byakuya, completely overwhelmed by a passion he had never known before in his life, so innocent and in love that he's unable to stop the overwhelming desire for Renji, finding himself so completely in his power, even knowing how his duties as clan leader and captain of the 13 Gotei make it impossible for such a behavior. I'm really curious and anxious to read new chapters of this promising new story! I'm totally captivated!
Thank you for your hard work!
| Walkure Leuad chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
Oh boy. I can see this waiting until you're ready derailing into oh so many bad possibilities.
But you didn't disappointed when byakuya decided not to take renji. He is not into rushing things and in my head I do see him as a considerate lover. So it will follow that after renji explained his reasons he wouldn't have the heart to press the issue further. And renji should give himself willingly anyways. Not out of ill do it so I don't loose you.
And did I miss something or renji didn't use a condom this time either!
Also, what if its renji the one getting pregnant when byakuya finally does the deed. If I remember correctly byakuya can get pregnant or make his partner pregnant?
| Walkure Leuad chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
Delighted you finally updated this! And please don't worry about being in character this or that. Pff. This is fanfiction after all!
I see a world of trouble ahead. Drama and emotional issues as think as the Amazonian jungle. Tut. Tut.
Shuhei will keep friends with renji and I can picture byakuya thinking the worst. Claiming stuff that isn't there and renji blowing up on his face.
If renji bolts right now for whatever trauma I'm sure he will not come up clean about or for whatever macho reason, byakuya is not goig to be happy camper and this might derail him into the road of doubts and 'what I've done'.
Loved loved the way you wrote that little panick attack there, just before renji arrived. One can picture so perfectly how cornered byakuya might have felt. It just tide in perfectly with how pushy about sex renji was the previous night, and how byakuya might feel rushed when it is barely sinking in he got in a relationship wih someone so different.
And people might think byakuya like this is out of character but is actually canon how he lowers his barriers in some cases (such as how he behaved upon hisana's dying moments or when he apologised to rukia). Also, often a really strong hard shell person is most vulnerable emotionally and their hard exterior is protecting that they don't want the world to see).
| geecee chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
There were some smart dialogues about equality in relationship :D Byakuya is a lovin person at heart, he will teach Renji (aww) but I guess he'll feel some 'broken heart' before Renji loves him trully (aww..). Top!Renji is sexy, btw x3
PS. The plot for AU! Aizen/Bya which Bya is kitsune-hybrid is very intriguing. Looking forward to it! :D
| geecee chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Bya is adorable, and Renji...this kind of Renji is interesting. It's amusing to follow their minds, which is full of uncertainty. Love it so far :D
| Gunmetal.silvr chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
HA! So byakuya knows that being with renji will only lead to tons of heartache! Oh byakuya-bo, this is only the beginning...
Though I think it's at this point of the story that I feel genuinely sorry for the both of them now, where Byakuya full of hope and all... and he doesn't see the huge painful events coming along (because knowing you Starfire, there will be painful stuff coming along!)
Anyway, more please? :D