Reviews for Bow Out
keep-me-posted chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
I did not expect another chapter to this story, but I'm so glad you wrote this! Perfect ending to an amazing story. I just love that we got to see Felix's kiss-her-ear-to-rid-the-nightmares in action. And I loved Tamora holding him at the end, so you know that she already did forgive him, which is just perfect. :]

Keep up the amazing work!
Reeves3 chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Soooooooooo adroable! I love the way you write these two and I hope to see more HC fics from you in the future. :D

Really, amazing job. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
You have such a way with words. This is the most heartwarming thing I've ever read. Thank you
ida4444 chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
*sigh* This was great. I love happy endings so much. :)
SlipknotGhidorah chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
Heh. Great way to end a story. Who knew of her nightmares?
CookiesxMilkEXCITEMe chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
Still love it. :D
It was sweet.
Poor Calhoun. :(

-Saya
Yami-sama42 chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
Awwww! It's sooooooo cuuuuute.

Before WIR, I never really had an OTP for any fandom (or at least I never thought of them that way), but I definitely do now. This was just gorgeous and brilliant and bloody hell it was amazing. :D

So glad you continued it after that first chapter. It is a true masterpiece. :D
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
Such a beautiful ending...! *sparkle eyes*
LittleMissPanda84 chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
This is one of the most epic stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. (: Seriously, it's like..PERFECT.
I love the way you portrayed Brad. He's not an asshole to Felix like I have read in other stories. And that line about Tammy wanting kids nearly killed me. xD
And, call me crazy, but I really loved Tammy and Felix's argument. (If one can even call it an argument since it was just Tammy kinda yelling at Felix..) You wrote it so well that I could actually see it playing in my head like a movie. Especially everything that she was saying. (pffft..mod damn. how clever.) xD
Now I have only one question..was that the end? It's totally perfect if it was, but an epilogue would be cool too. (:
Well anyways, either way it is awesome. GREAT story. :D
LastOneOut chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
DSOFJERAPEKMDSFLZSJKD You are perfect, thank you for writing this 3
nessier15 chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
This was so good! You are an amazing writer! Loved the part about Tammy wanting kids...huge smile across my face :D
SlipknotGhidorah chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Hmm...wonder where would Brad go?
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Nice ending! Not everything is said and done, but it's shown that that will eventually happen!
Man, Brad is cool. I totes respect him!
Reeves3 chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
That was bittersweet. I felt sorry for Brad but happy for Felix. Also Brad telling Felix that Tamora wanted a bunch of kids made me laugh. XD

Keep up the wonderful writing. :) I can't wait for more.
keep-me-posted chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
Amazing ending! So, a few things I want to say: First off, I just love your interpretation of Brad. He is awesome. I feel like seeing him in other stories, lol.

I just loved the "Mod damn" part; seriously made me laugh out loud, despite the context. And the part where Brad was asking Tamora why she chose Felix and what not, honestly, the whole time I was thinking, "Aww, he's like Quasimodo". But with words. You know, at the end of Hunchback when he kinda just tosses his feelings aside and brings Esmeralda and Phoebus together. I actually think at one point I expected him to take each of their hands and bring them together that way. ;P

Also, this line: "it makes less sense than a hammer fixin' a broken window." XD Oh, and the line about Tamora wanting kids! I just loved it.

Great story, great ending. Keep on rockin'! :D
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