|Reviews for Cloud's Story|
| don't fuck that burrito chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
I think this is a pretty good story so far! It seems a bit rushed, though. Maybe you should go back and give more of a backstory to Cloud and Cactuses affair? Anyways, I liked it. If you want a co-author pm me! :3
| awsomegurlz chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
I'm not into Warrior Cats but I really like this story! It's really intriguing.