Reviews for Fresh Out of Luck
BlackMoonsDaughter chapter 5 . 6/30
Pitch got stack by Cupid's arrows! And... what the fuck, now did Lyra's "guys" found the right time to interfere?! Please update soon, I have to read what happens next!
BlackMoonsDaughter chapter 4 . 6/30
BlackMoonsDaughter chapter 2 . 6/30
Oh boy...
BlackMoonsDaughter chapter 1 . 6/30
Wow, this looks good!
JHTANGELS chapter 5 . 3/29
Oh that was so good! Please keep up!
JHTANGELS chapter 4 . 3/29
Oh poor girl!
JHTANGELS chapter 3 . 3/29
Uh-oh this isn't good!
JHTANGELS chapter 2 . 3/29
This is so funny! I love the girl!
JHTANGELS chapter 1 . 3/29
She is trying to catch Pitch's attention for about 150 years?! Wow!
The Arkham Knight chapter 5 . 3/15
Wow her reaction to finally meeting him! Keep it coming!
itte'sasprite chapter 5 . 3/12
AW GEE WHY? I like the bit of past that you showed.. and also how the leprachauns probably appreciate and like lyra more than we expected. It'll be interesting to see how the relationship between jack, pitch and pyra evolves.. I look forward to it! :)
Sheepfuzz chapter 5 . 2/12
Ok just wow. This is amazing please continue I love this.
JaDe In NighT chapter 5 . 2/5
You aren't the only one Pitch everyone will find it strange if some gnomes yell while throwing gold and hammers at you
Rosto'sGirl chapter 5 . 1/27
Did Pitch just get hit with an arrow...? He so did. Anyway, I loved the last scene! It was awesome!
inkpixie chapter 5 . 1/26
OMGOMGOMG! Yay another PitchxOC! Normally I'm quite reluctant to read these kinds of stories especially with my Nightmare King. But kudos to you, I like Lyra! She's not your typical Mary Sue-ish OC. She has her own personality and that's a good thing. Hmm. A romance between the Boogeyman and the Leprechaun. This is new, and exciting. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Oh and, your writing style is great! Keep it up :)

P.S. I'm really sensitive and meticulous when it comes to Pitch's character and personality in stories but I must say, you portray him well so far. He was so cute when all he could say was "...What?". Hahahaha. Hope you can update soon! You've got me offically hooked!
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