Reviews for Fresh Out of Luck
Gustauve-Drakenhime chapter 5 . 1/31
I sincerely wish to see more of this in the future.
I appreciate the way in which your character, Lyra, seems so normal in regards to her feelings.
No convoluted love story, just a woman who struggles with her emotions just like everyone else.
It's just now getting so interesting, and I do hope you continue this some time soon.
Until then, I wish you the best of luck.
Black Moons Daughter chapter 5 . 6/30/2016
Pitch got stack by Cupid's arrows! And... what the fuck, now did Lyra's "guys" found the right time to interfere?! Please update soon, I have to read what happens next!
Black Moons Daughter chapter 4 . 6/30/2016
Awww...
Black Moons Daughter chapter 2 . 6/30/2016
Oh boy...
Black Moons Daughter chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Wow, this looks good!
JHTANGELS chapter 5 . 3/29/2016
Oh that was so good! Please keep up!
JHTANGELS chapter 4 . 3/29/2016
Oh poor girl!
JHTANGELS chapter 3 . 3/29/2016
Uh-oh this isn't good!
JHTANGELS chapter 2 . 3/29/2016
This is so funny! I love the girl!
JHTANGELS chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
She is trying to catch Pitch's attention for about 150 years?! Wow!
The Arkham Knight chapter 5 . 3/15/2016
Wow her reaction to finally meeting him! Keep it coming!
itte'sasprite chapter 5 . 3/12/2016
AW GEE WHY? I like the bit of past that you showed.. and also how the leprachauns probably appreciate and like lyra more than we expected. It'll be interesting to see how the relationship between jack, pitch and pyra evolves.. I look forward to it! :)
Sheepfuzz chapter 5 . 2/12/2016
Ok just wow. This is amazing please continue I love this.
JaDe In NighT chapter 5 . 2/5/2016
You aren't the only one Pitch everyone will find it strange if some gnomes yell while throwing gold and hammers at you
Rosto'sGirl chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Did Pitch just get hit with an arrow...? He so did. Anyway, I loved the last scene! It was awesome!
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